Reviews for Missing Memories
Greenery chapter 3 . 4/27/2009
There are a few formatting issues here, but ignoring those it's a good story. I like :]
GiGi26 chapter 3 . 2/20/2009
I love the mystery in this story, very suspensful! Can't wait for the next update.
MaskedNightingale chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Nice beginning
Frayling0 chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
Hmm... glad to see a longer chappie this time, but I hope more happens in the next chapter. Much of this is taken up by the song. Good, nevertheless, keep it up.
Greenery chapter 2 . 12/21/2008
neat! a few run on sentences but otherwise a good second chapter. not much has been revealed about your characters. can't wait to learn more about them!
Greenery chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
WOW this is really good so far. your description is mazing. very well done. the dialogue could maybe use some work. Punctuation goes inside quotation marks in dialogue, and when your characters are talking it doesn't seem as detailed. btu still really good. on to the next chapter!
John Bark chapter 2 . 12/16/2008
It is AWESOME! write more plz
Alex James chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
why did u stop!

this is one of my favorites...but what ever happened to the other guy?
Frayling0 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Hm... interesting. I'm clueless but its good how you've formed an immediate mystery for the reader to disover what's going on. Good job :)