Reviews for Vampire Romance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love the story please keep writing thank you... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again the no/know and new/knew thing, there is a difference |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is and difference between no and know. You used no instead of know at least eight times in this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well done, good plot line and organization. The grammer could use some work though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was pretty good. you need to make another chapter. :) |