Reviews for Fragments
before it rains chapter 3 . 5/3/2010
my heart just skipped a beat.
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 4 . 10/20/2009
Wow, your description is so emotive! This is you your writing is talking of? You are very talented in conveying what oyu feel :)
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 2 . 10/20/2009
Love how you wrote this! The short sentences really work. Do you think you shall ever write professionally to be published?
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
And every love song on the radio ceases to be enough, because there is no crescendo big enough to match the way your heart swells every time he holds your hand, and there are no lyrics to describe the way he makes you feel without trivialising it all, because he is everything, everything and more.

- have I mentioned how much of a way with words you have?
anime09 chapter 4 . 5/26/2009
I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this. I read it a few months ago, but I just now got around to reviewing it. Sorry. Anyway, it is very similar to something I am going through right now and I could really relate to it. Thank you and great job!
SecretSymphony chapter 4 . 12/12/2008
It's really good!

There's only one thing i can tell you to improve it :D

I think perhaps you should make your chapters a bit longer

they've started to get bigger but you should keep working on it

Don't give up!