Aww...that was sweet. Love the character interaction and word choice. Great job! :D

ah ! :D:D

i love this story ;D

aw that was so sweet! that could be a one-shot or a whole story thats totally up to you!

That is so cute! I like it :)

Aw, this is really cute, although Elise seems like a very insecure girl.

Aw.

So cuute!

And such a fantasy.

I give it an 8,

but that's only because I'm a tad confused about what brought this whole thing on.

But it's so adorable!