Reviews for The World of the Dead
Little Miss Shadow chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Very impressive. The lines "Where tears and lives bleed rom the earth/Where the water is tainted by infinate curse" are those which reall "make" the poem, so to speak. (omitting the obvious "the world of the dead lies just beyond your life". You used a basic format, quite nicely, no fancy stuff as far as that goes, which clashed with the eloquence of your choice of words. (hey, clashing is good! :) ) All in all, enjoyed it very much. :)
shana chapter 1 . 9/30/2001
wanna hear someothing ironic? (do i care? i'm tellin' ya anyway) i'm an athiest and i thought this was gonna be all about heaven and that sh*t that i don't believe in. i was pleasently surprised. is that what you think happens to ppl after they die? i love the last line. i think this is one of your best poems...
Jade chapter 1 . 5/13/2001
_ Thaat t'was beautimous n' stuff! D hehe, all I read are depressing poems. When one is in a... let's say droll or saddened mood, it gives the poem personality... When one is allowing their tears into the poem, it gives it life...

Barbara Fett chapter 1 . 4/25/2001
I think this is the poem you should submit for the school writing contest. (I heard about it through METMA)
METMA Mandy Signed Review chapter 1 . 4/24/2001
Luff it xobo! You know that part with the moon reflecting its blood red face? I liked that! :) Very super cool imagery though i've never seen a red moon. maybe at sunset... *annnnyway* i'm totally rambling. great fic, xoe, and i love freddy's review *snicker*
fred chapter 1 . 4/22/2001
ur good...almost too good
Ellerfru chapter 1 . 4/21/2001
I love this! Guess I have a taste for dark poetry...
Spindel chapter 1 . 4/20/2001
I really really like this poem. It was awesome... I added it to my favorites list..
Saphirre1 chapter 1 . 4/20/2001
I like it a lot! it reminds me of the kind of poems I right! VERY COOL!
Barbara Fett chapter 1 . 4/20/2001
Wow, that was good! Very dramatic.
Whoa. this is Figgy not signed in chapter 1 . 4/20/2001
Whoa... that was trippier than the matrix... and that's saying something.