Reviews for Double suicide
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
"it’s the right one for me"... is

"There’s few ones who find out"... There are

I really love that first verse. The play on different types of endings is really different and it definitely makes you want to read more.

The last line in the chorus confused me a bit though...

The piece has a really great message. Nice job.
Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Really interesting begining it seemed almost like it could be metal but then at the end it seemed almost like emo metal... Anywhoo your song flows failry well it reminds me of the song by Hobastank (i think that's how its spelled) called The First Of Me. Really good song I recomend looking it up sometime anywhoo. Well done! I enjoyed it )
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
ich hoffe doch, du bleibst uns noch etwas erhalten?
Living Life Free chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
This line "I'm not the kind who gives up without givin' you a fight." and the chorus... is awesome
Natalie-Rayne chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Great, as always! Love ya!