Reviews for My Identity
underneaththesmile chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
this is really gewd! i would suggest not making the rhyming scheme so much every line or so literal. like you could do

you know my name

just where I hide

in this broken picture frame

or rhyme me with underneath you kinda see what I mean? idk, rhyming stuff isn't my favorite, but this was still gewd! its full of emotion and im not sure what exactly its about, but I think about this person who kinda knows you inside-out yet you don't know what to do with that or someone that knows something and you're afraid? other than that its got a nice beat to it and it would make an awesome song. love it
Marie Bee chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
I'm one of those people who have no idea why you wrote this... but I like it alot... well-written.

Good job...