cool! i've always been fascinated with the Chinese zodiacs. great story. update.

I'm only on the prologue and I like it already. :-)

The idea you have is quite interesting, I can't wait to read more! I wonder how your story will progress. Will be watching it!

There is no need to worry. It's in the manga section, so it's easy to see this as a manga/anime. That's the best thing about that category since imagination is no holds every hair & eye colour is acceptable.

I love how this is going, it really grips my attention. I also like how you're introducing characters.

Good work, I'll be keeping an eye on this.

I really don't have much constructive criticism to offer, except perhaps to say that people usually address their own older sisters as ne-chan/ ne-san, instead of anesan. But basically, this is probably the best fantasy manga story I've read so far- your writing style is very good, the storyline is interesting. All in all, brilliant!