Loved this story. Absolutely cute and wonderful!

I love this story soo damn much...I love ur it up!

The only thing I didn't like was that the story started funny and light, and then it changed completly. I expected another thing and the sudden change killed my interest a little, but overall it was a nice story to pass the time..

Chapter 1 was funny, and i went to Chapter 2 trusting that you' ll just keep the good things happen. Well, I felt betrayed. You know that thing about authors that makes them shine? Their trustworthy personality. They bring the readers to some sort of high and keeps doing that without breaking the tension. Things just keeps getting escalated with every scene. They don't make the readers get excited and then write something far from the current drama. You did just that. This kinda sucks. Thumbs down.

So much love for these guys. (Hoping for a love story for Johnny.)

P.S. Question. Wasn't Tara dating Jerry? Think it was chapter 14 or 15, but Tara was with a Jimmy instead, which confused me. Not sure if I remembered the names clearly.

Daniel eyed him warily. "Do you want the truth?"

"No," Kyrian responded sarcastically, "I just like asking questions because the movement of my jaw and tongue burns calories."

New favourite quote.

LOVING the story and the characters. I'd review more often but at the end of each chapter, I'm already yearning for more.

no epilogue yet?

aww thane is soo sweet :). as cliche as it sounds, I hope he gets his happy ending. I understand him since I'm an overprotective sibling too.

well that developed quickly

aww such cute parents

ahhh what happened with chad nessa and thane? how come he was so cool about nessa getting married to chad ? nessa is so sweet :)

hehe what a sadist . i like him

Lol ooooh shit sly ky

I know people probably say this all the time to you but i loved your story it was amazing and beautiful, the only down side was it ended. I kniw all stories have to end but i wanna keep reading! I love Kyrian and Johnny they were my fav characters and i loved chapter 12 (or was it 11?) when Tanya was drunk, hilarlious! Chapter 15 (/14) really pulled on the heart strings though :( ...i should stop now because you probably do wanna hear/read me keep rambling, anyway awesome story!

-Belle x

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