Reviews for Bet You Can't! |
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lolacakes chapter 16 . 12/7/2009 No! I don't want it to be over!( |
Fantom Phreeke chapter 15 . 12/7/2009 yeah, well everyone does the sex scenes anyway. hey, it's a part of writing. When you need hot and steamy, you write hot and steamy. Anyway, so I'm confused. is the story really over? because it kind of seems like you're going to post another chapter. But this was a great story! amazing. Thank you very much. -Bambi |
Fantom Phreeke chapter 12 . 12/7/2009 aw! so amazing! I could totally see this as a play. or movie! you should try to lenthen it, and get it published. (you know, if you're into that sort of thing) -Bambi |
Fantom Phreeke chapter 9 . 12/6/2009 oh! yay! you rock! great kiss. -Bambi |
LondonLi chapter 16 . 12/6/2009 Thanks so much for posting a happier chapter; I'm looking forward to both the epilogue and Thane's one-shot. He really needs a happy ending too! I still think Kyrian needs to do more groveling, though.:) |
crzy-book-frk chapter 16 . 12/6/2009 So will the epilogue be like a few years in the future, like will it tell if Ky and tanya get married or not? or will he propose or do something? Im dying here! |
kynthiaphellan chapter 16 . 12/6/2009 That story was...fast. Faster that most. |
Qatariyah chapter 16 . 12/6/2009 one question, is this the last of the series? if yes, what's next on your agenda? |
Fantom Phreeke chapter 6 . 12/6/2009 oh my gosh! that was such a great chapter! I wish that I could shoot a movie of this chapter! the entire story so far is perfect. but i'm very emotionally attached to the conclusion of this segment. thank you very much. -Bambi |
Hazelnut Romance chapter 16 . 12/5/2009 can't wait for the one-shot to come up, nor the epilogue. i can't believe it is over! i really liked reading this story ) will be hanging around for more of your stories! |
sunny30 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009 I loved this story. I love how all the characters played out and how u made each one different but they all mesh well together. I know that you will not make stories of other characters' but I won't stop wishing. Thanks for sharing the story w/ all of us readers. Thank you! :D |
Yellow.Jellow chapter 16 . 12/5/2009 Loved how you ended it! and the ending too... overall, the only problem I had was how much of the other story you incorporated into this one. I know, I know, they're companion stories... but stil I think this one would have fine all on it's own. Actually, I take that back because then Aria's part of the story wouldn't make sense. So... yeah I think I'll skip out on the epilogue if you make one because I liked how the story ended as it is. Can't wait to read your next story! |
Fantom Phreeke chapter 3 . 12/5/2009 okay, now I get it! that makes so much more scince now! you're not going over what happened that year, so that we will lear little clues as we go! alright! but I suggest that you add dates, or at least years to this. It's very, very confusing if you don't know what's going on. -Bambi |
Fantom Phreeke chapter 2 . 12/5/2009 1)liked the flashback 2)Matthew obviously didn't actually love her, otherwise, he would see past her faults and not be so upset. 3)pretty good chapter. 4)okay, now i'm confused. you went from being a 10th grader to being a junior (?) in college. what age is she? -Bambi |
Yellow.Jellow chapter 12 . 12/5/2009 What a sweet fiance! Now I'm convinced all the good ones are taken, sighh |