| Reviews for Bet You Can't! |
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   MarloCarlo10 chapter 14 . 9/30/2009 Lol I love her dad D Oh Chad and Nessa how I love them so! Oh Ky...he's so CUTE when he's jealous ) Great chap! |
| walkonair chapter 15 . 9/30/2009 I don't really think you're rushing this at all. Hormones 'I Love You's' hot clothes a bunch of dancing/attached at the hipness (hey, a new word!) sex. Also, yeah, about 90% of the 'M' rated stories on FictionPress are more 'MA' . . .but, like most things related to FP's rules (), the mods do nothing about it. (Can you tell I'm a bit bitter about FP? You CAN? I never would have guessed :) |
| KelaBelle chapter 15 . 9/30/2009 wow great chapter x |
| JZK chapter 15 . 9/30/2009 yey they finally admitted it |
| MaPluie chapter 15 . 9/30/2009 ohmygosh, they're finally together. i am so happy! ;D |
| blurrylights chapter 15 . 9/30/2009 Hm...that was a bit fast. I wish it was a bit more elongated, at least the explanation. I know there is ALWAYS more to explain, considering I went through something similar recently, personally. However, you did explain it really well. And I loved the flashback...finally Tanya found out. They're so hot and cold, it's like their relationship is bipolar. I'm, sure there are going to be more ups and downs before the end, but I'm excited to see what happens! Update soon, or I WILL throw sunglasses at you. :) |
| Aaerie chapter 15 . 9/30/2009 cant wait till nxt chap |
| Hazelnut Romance chapter 15 . 9/30/2009 nice ending to the chapter! |
| ShrimpoJewels chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 Well it all makes sense...go Ky for finally telling her? Though what he said the morning after to her probably wasn't the best... |
| Four and Twenty Blackbirds chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 As usual, I loved it. And I didn't think it went to fast. Can't wait to read more! Thanks. :) |
| Priscilla Shay chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 Really? M - doesn't include explict sex? Lol, i don't think people know that because a lot of them rate their stories "M" rather than "T" because of those scenes. There are a lot of smut stories rated "M" on FP. now...about this story...It DOES seem rushed, but eh, it's your story, have at it. Honestly, I'm just happy they're finally together lol. I thought Nick was going to punch Ky or something... Especially after the climbing out the window thing... lol Now, go revise and write more! |
| LondonLi chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 Well, it's about time! He really needs to start treating her with more respect. Him thinking that he always knows what's best and calling all the shots are going to get them nowhere fast as a couple. Thanks for the update! |
| HoneyAppleEater chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 yay another chappie. still lovin it. plz update soon! |
| AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 Yeah that was fast but all the beating around ythe bush had to stop. Glad it did! Noww, that is a really,really, sad life story Kyrian has. Not sure how you're going to end this but i'll like it either way. Uhh..oh yeah! Explicit sec scenes are everywheree on this site...no one abides by the rules. Oh well...SO until next chapter then! |
| chng234 chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 finally the truth is out of y kyrian left tanya. i m happy they r together again. is the story coming to an end? |