| Reviews for Bet You Can't! |
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   AsakuraX chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 I absolutely love this story! I can't wait to see how you respin this. And I wanted to thank you. When I was thinking of names for my future son, I couldn't come up with anything. Then I read this and immediately the name Kyrian clicked with me. So thank you for giving me the name of my first born son |
| u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 So...how much of the story is left? Great chapter though. very fast like u said in the a/n but if u slowed it down i would get really really bored. So good job! |
| MiZZ SaHurr chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 Yay for an update! I think whatever you decide, I will continue to read, so it's all good from my end of the spectrum...umm, yeah, but I'm so glad he finally told her, because it was about time. So yeah, that's great too, and with that said, I can't wait to see where this goes next! |
| book-geek chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 great chpter, cant wait for the next one! |
| Dead Deactivated chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 IT was rushed... but it was fine |
| kynthiaphellan chapter 15 . 9/29/2009 Well, the story did go a bit fast, but it was close enough to the time I would've expected for it not to matter. And about the whole M rating thing, it's just, well, there are stories on FP that have explicit sex scenes. I am aware that the FictionPress doesn't allow explicit content to begin with, but there are people that ignore it. Just had to, throw that in there. |
| walkonair chapter 14 . 9/26/2009 I was so glad to see that you updated! Of course, it took me more than a week to review, sorry! IMHO, there are a few too many characters in this chapter, but I don't think you can do much about it! Please, don't take that as a flame or anything, just it gets a bit confusing. Your characters are mainly quite lovable (and quirky!)- keep up the good work! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Walkonair/Katieeliza |
| jessie0754 chapter 14 . 9/25/2009 Just found this, and I'm loving it :D Updates are totally welcome! |
| Sariah H chapter 14 . 9/24/2009 I absolutely seem to adore ALL of your stories! They are just great, happy romances. |
| Ambi Potter chapter 14 . 9/23/2009 This is REALLY good! Keep writing! I have ticked all four boxes below the comment box cuz I luv ya so much! (and the story) keep writing, Amber |
| jenni-tay chapter 14 . 9/22/2009 heaps good story! grr kyrian is a rat! and johnny is so sweet! great story plz update son |
| ChocoResha chapter 14 . 9/21/2009 Man Mr. and Mrs. Sanchez are two cool parents! I would keep on praising them over and over but I just don't know what more to say. By the way, the moment Tanya started towards Kent, 'Jealousy time' started ringing in my head xD And sure enough, there Kyrian was, all adorably jealous! I read too much romances. |
| ChocoResha chapter 13 . 9/21/2009 Hmm, I just realised that Tanya isn't objecting or moving away from Kyrian. She's suddenly become very... accept-ive? Yay, the characters from DTIA are here~! Well, they were here before but not much. More now! :D |
| ChocoResha chapter 12 . 9/21/2009 Aw, Kyrian's just so... so... aww! 'Kay, I sounded like an idiot but what else was I supposed to say? Besides this: Ew Natalie; slutty much! |
| ChocoResha chapter 11 . 9/21/2009 Being high on sugar is great :D And cheesecakes rocks my socks, does it yours? Uh, I think I just killed the grammar in my last sentence. Oh well! I never knew Kyrian and Tanya had gotten involved with each other? I thought the were just really close friends. I guess I thought wrong? |