| Reviews for Bet You Can't! |
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   whatdotheydream chapter 15 . 10/1/2012 OHMYDEARGOD. Her "baby" did die! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooo...Geez. Do you HAVE to make me so sad? Agh. Poor, poor Tanya! |
| whatdotheydream chapter 11 . 10/1/2012 Dear God. I thought it had DIED. But it just didn't exist. Poor dear. |
| whatdotheydream chapter 9 . 10/1/2012 LOLS. OMDG. That was HILARIOUS! And cute |
| mydreamadventure chapter 4 . 9/26/2012 i like this story i really do :D |
| Shereads48 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012 Glad to follow |
| rocsanna2 chapter 16 . 9/15/2012 I loved it, I loved it, I really really loved it! You've done an amazing job with this one, so good luck! |
| heal me forever chapter 16 . 8/27/2012 wow dis is awesum...u shuld have inculded d 11 grade as flashblack..nd all making it as 30 chpaters:P neverless...its an amzing stry...love kynd nick 3 xxx |
| Lily806 chapter 16 . 8/21/2012 Lol! One last bet for him! haha! |
| Neverland.dream chapter 16 . 8/10/2012 AWWWWWWWWWWW! *sigh* such a feel-good story. :) I LOVE IT! :D |
| Choukou chapter 16 . 8/9/2012 Love love love this story, and it's prequel. They were just too cute. :) |
| S chapter 16 . 8/9/2012 Me again, didn't realise original was also up. LOL. |
| S chapter 16 . 8/9/2012 It's been years, where's that epilogue you promised? Also, since Devit take it all is on hiatus, I didn't understand several parts of this story : please put up the original again? |
| inkwriter95 chapter 16 . 7/13/2012 Ok, lots of review-y stuff here. First, I really liked this story. It was nice and long and interesting all the way through. That said, I think it may have gone a little too fast. Yeah, I know, the whole ky-Tanya sex scene was all set up but... Well, I think their relationship should have taken longer to, uh, mend. You could have just had them sleep in the same bed, accidentally or something, and that would trigger the flashback. Oh well, it's your story. Also, I think you could've used a bit more background on some of the characters, like neveda, thane, and Jonah. I felt like I was missing something when they were brought up. Anyway, lovely story, good structure, nice grammar, I'm just sad it's over. ) |
| ForgottenHope chapter 15 . 6/25/2012 I read this story before years ago. I've never read a story on here twice because I never felt the desire to do so, but I just HAD to read this one again. And I enjoyed it just as much! Speaks volumes on your storytelling. Don't know if you're still planning on posting an epilogue, but I'd say go for it. Doesn't matter how long ago you last posted. :) |
| me chapter 16 . 5/26/2012 epilogue coming soon huh? well it's been 3 years. i don't know what your definition of "soon" is. |