Reviews for Bet You Can't!
mydreamadventure chapter 4 . 9/26/2012
i like this story i really do :D
Shereads48 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Glad to follow
rocsanna2 chapter 16 . 9/15/2012
I loved it, I loved it, I really really loved it! You've done an amazing job with this one, so good luck!
heal me forever chapter 16 . 8/27/2012
wow dis is awesum...u shuld have inculded d 11 grade as flashblack..nd all making it as 30 chpaters:P neverless...its an amzing stry...love kynd nick 3 xxx
Lily806 chapter 16 . 8/21/2012
Lol! One last bet for him! haha!
Neverland.dream chapter 16 . 8/10/2012
AWWWWWWWWWWW! *sigh* such a feel-good story. :) I LOVE IT! :D
Choukou chapter 16 . 8/9/2012
Love love love this story, and it's prequel. They were just too cute. :)
S chapter 16 . 8/9/2012
Me again, didn't realise original was also up. LOL.
S chapter 16 . 8/9/2012
It's been years, where's that epilogue you promised?
Also, since Devit take it all is on hiatus, I didn't understand several parts of this story : please put up the original again?
inkwriter95 chapter 16 . 7/13/2012
Ok, lots of review-y stuff here. First, I really liked this story. It was nice and long and interesting all the way through. That said, I think it may have gone a little too fast. Yeah, I know, the whole ky-Tanya sex scene was all set up but... Well, I think their relationship should have taken longer to, uh, mend. You could have just had them sleep in the same bed, accidentally or something, and that would trigger the flashback. Oh well, it's your story. Also, I think you could've used a bit more background on some of the characters, like neveda, thane, and Jonah. I felt like I was missing something when they were brought up. Anyway, lovely story, good structure, nice grammar, I'm just sad it's over. )
ForgottenHope chapter 15 . 6/25/2012
I read this story before years ago. I've never read a story on here twice because I never felt the desire to do so, but I just HAD to read this one again. And I enjoyed it just as much! Speaks volumes on your storytelling. Don't know if you're still planning on posting an epilogue, but I'd say go for it. Doesn't matter how long ago you last posted. :)
me chapter 16 . 5/26/2012
epilogue coming soon huh? well it's been 3 years. i don't know what your definition of "soon" is.
N-butterfly chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
Whoa, okay... That was a waaay different turnout than I expected. I feel a little like Tanya's seriously full of herself, and I never usually like it when like, every single guy seems to be in love with the main character.

1. The flashback seemed a little unnecessary, yeah. It could've been summarized as a thought in a few sentences, but it's not that bad.

2. Erm is right. I laughed at first when he confessed, thinking this was like, something Kyrian arranged to happen, but when he started screaming at T in the pub, I was sooo just, weirded out.

3. Eh, pretty good. I love that it's well proofread (always appreciated), and the plot is moving along, I guess. The characters were nicely introduced.

4. Lmaooo on the sample comments, but I think I'll just head on to the next chap. Hopefully Kyrian's in it :)
N-butterfly chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Cute first chap :) Funny, too ;)
twibbit chapter 16 . 4/6/2012
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