Reviews for Bet You Can't!
TasteYourSins chapter 7 . 4/12/2011
"Because anybody with eyes can see that you're gagga-googoo over Tanya."

"I can't believe you just said 'gagga-googoo'," Kyrian muttered.

TasteYourSins chapter 5 . 4/11/2011

No I'm just kidding. ...Or am I?

I meant that to Kyrian, btw. WHAT DID HE DO! WHY'D HE LEAVE HER! GODDAMMIT. :))
TasteYourSins chapter 3 . 4/11/2011

Hmm...I'm still confused though. I still don't know why they fought...maybe 'cuz of that 'bet you can't seduce me' thing? Eh, I'll find out soon enough. :)
ForgottenHope chapter 16 . 3/20/2011
So... Oddly enough, I read this sequel before I read DTIA. Heh heh... I only realized this after reading DTIA and then looking for the sequel to read. Needless to say, the first time I read Bet You Can't! I didn't get the significance of the vows or the relationships between Jonah & Neveda and Thane & Allison. So I reread those parts and understood a whole lot more. Silly me... :) I've got to say though, your stories have some of the most amusing and captivating plots I've found on fp. And they always make me laugh! Which causes the people around me to give me strange looks, but it's so worth it! ] I hope you'll be writing another story for this series, as I'd love to find out how Thane and Jonah figure things out between themselves and the women they're in love with.
ForeverInfinity chapter 16 . 2/26/2011
For some weird reason, I have not reviewed. I think...


Or add it to my favorites. Wow.


I loved it. :D

Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
I think that that is a great prologue!

I love how they dare each other.

The gay thing is outrageous. xD Gah. Poor Kyrian.
christinaxxyo chapter 16 . 1/26/2011
Great job :) This was really cute.
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Hahaha, I can't help but laugh because of Ky and Tanya's antics. This story started off with a really unique and funny twist. I can't wait to read more :)
blithe.serendipity chapter 16 . 1/20/2011
Ehh it was a fun read but I kinda wish you wrote about their high school days instead. But it was still a really good story :) One other thing I would've liked to see more of was Tanya/Kyrian's chemistry. There wasn't enough buildup. My favorite chapter was the 1st one. I liked those bets but then yeah. I would've liked to see the seducing.

Thanks for writing!
Midnight113 chapter 16 . 1/19/2011
Oh I loved this so much! It was so well written. The emotions and character connections going on were perfectly captured. I adored it, beautiful work... well done!
LovexxRanda chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
(1) So that's really it?

No, there's an epilogue coming...soon, hopefully.

haha i already commented on chapter 15 so I cant again.. so i was wondering if you had finished the epilogue or if its on here somewhere I cant find it? I really loved this story it inspired me to write and I would really love to read more and just idk I miss these characters I did'nt expect to like project myself onto characters in a story I found on the internet I really didnt think I would love it this much but I have reread it ALOT lol:)

so please let me know whats going on with that haha:)
miaaa chapter 16 . 1/2/2011
I know you've long past finished this story, but I just wanted to say that I absolutely loved it :')
Jaliy chapter 16 . 12/23/2010
Nice story..very entertaining!

Good job.

WickedSauce chapter 16 . 12/15/2010
I'll wait forever - FOREVER - for a epilogue. You'd be doing me a giant personal favor by writing a (gulp) sequel. Well, I loved it however you slice it! Really splendid! Spectacular! Superb! Superlative! Awesome!

Bubbly Girl chapter 16 . 11/23/2010
Really amazing story! :) Two thumbs up! ;)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl
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