Yay! They kissed! update soon.

aw this chapter made me giggle like a little school girl !

I love how each of your chapters are beautifully constructed. I mean they aren't choppy and there isn't too much happening in each of them. You're very eloquent! I love this story, the plot line and I can't wait for more!

Sincerely,

Charades

Sorry I haven't reviewed in the last few chapters but I was so caught up in reading... This story is really awesome and I can't wait for more! :D

Wow, so far this story is really interesting! I wonder why she fainted though... Well, I guess I'll find out! :D

all i can really say is FINALLY! wow, it's about time.

I love the dynamic between Quinn and Evelyn. He's a bit insecure himself, but her awkwardness is the thing that takes the cake for me. Now that she's got even MORE food for thought, it'll be interesting to see where things go. Well done! I can't wait for the next one.

This is getting really exciting. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!

I like the developments that are occurring! Update soon!

Oh, drunk Evelyn. Ridiculous. I would, however, have thrown in a few mentions of what type of alcohol she was drinking, so as to avoid using the word "alcohol" so much.

What about Evelyn's shoes? What if the young couple found them? That could tear a hole in the space-time continuum, yet Eliza's extremely chill about it.

I suppose it's just an era thing, but do guys even keep journals? Are they written that way at all? I mean, I honestly don't know. Quinn's journal just came across as awkward, that's all.

Cliffhanger! What on earth happened? I suppose you'll just have to update again!

Excellent chapter (I always feel bad when my reviews are overly critical)! Quinn and Evelyn have such a great dynamic. It's fun to read.

~~Mazzie~~

Nice chapter! I'm glad you're not rushing their relationship, even if they are getting married and all. Good job! Update!

Like a vampire, I thirst for more. I'm excited to see how far this charade is going to have to go. Evelyn is going to have to lighten up at some point, right? She should dish it back now and then-play Quinn's games and beat him at them.

As always, fabulous job and I can't wait for the next installment.

I have come to the speculation that Evelyn is actually the author. That, or all of them will come back to present day and Quinn or someone will write it.

Also, I'm really excited for Evelyn and Quinn to get married. I sense it will bring some awkwardness and some adorableness. I'm glad you're updating again, too!

~~Mazzie~~

That was an interesting twist. I'm still fully enjoying this story, its different and its definitly a fun situation most people have day-dreamed about.

Ooh, Evelyn and Quinn getting married! Even if this is just for show, I like the way this is going...hehehe. Great job! Update soon!

Hooray for a new chapter! Also, Evelyn is a girl after my own heart. I'm loving her honesty and the way everyone is slowly but surely accepting her and what help she can offer. I really want to see, as I'm sure you're making me want so desperately, Quinn and Evelyn to become too cute for words. I'm so excited for the next chapter!