|Reviews for No One|
| DarlynH chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Wow. You really have a way with words and descriptions. The way you put language together, even in such a short piece, just comes across as poetic.
I think this would make a great first chapter for a fantasy novel.
| Waitingnotsopatiently chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Aww...that's depressing. :(
It flowed really good, though. It's kinda like I felt like I was standing there, watching.
| theblindninja316 chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
It's a very well written piece. Congratulations.
| Narq chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Oh wow, this was great I liked the way you did a story, but with a poem taste to it.. am I making any sense?
oh well, it's nice all the same