Reviews for My Beloved - Original, Unedited Version |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ohh whoa! I love it! more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking so forward to reading this story. Please hurry and post rest of chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, I got to it four hours before midnight on the 24th. It's a good story, and I'll check back often for the updates! [or i could go the easy route and just put it on story alert...but i won't because i'm me] Good luck with your edits! Sylver |
![]() ![]() ![]() can we have an explanation of what happens to eda in the edited version please? |
![]() ![]() dude i think in the last review i spelled my name wrong? idk |
![]() ![]() Awsome I love My beloved! It'll give me a chance to reread it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa i loved this story! i mean it was great before but I wouldnt mind at all reading it again :D..I cant wait for the updated version |
![]() ![]() Hey cool! I bet it'll be better than ever ) But you're saving this version, right? Just in case? |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha kewl! Can't wait to read the edited verison. btw the day u start posting it, is my birthday lol. anyway can't wait 2 read it! :D |
![]() ![]() How exciting! Can't wait to read it again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope all the romance still stays in the story. I know one time yo mentioned taking alot of the romance out of the story. I really hope you don't take any romance out. I love it all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is Amazing. I love how the story flows naturally! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He better not be dead. |
![]() ![]() LOVELOVELOVE THIS STORY! if this was a book, this would be my FAVORITE book!:))D i wish it was one, just so i could have it. its just so wonderful and true love. i love how you didnt make it too promiscuous and i really like how you included God in it. WONDERFUL STORY ALTOGETHER. You made us girls fall in love with Alaric, and relate to Anwen. well, thats all. great story:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story! i was reading it for the second time today because the first time, it was unfinished, and i didn't have an account to put it on alert. great job! |