Wow! This story was really great! I loved the fact that you incorporated romance and good plot, all the while leaving it clean. I also liked how you had faith in God woven into the story. Good job! These are the types of stories I would like to write! My Beloved is definitely one of my favorites here on Fiction Press. I hope it gets published! It reminds me of something Francine Rivers would write. ) Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

i love your storys i am a huge fam

i wnt tell you my pen name for my own saftey

i am concerd another author on FP is copying your work "My Beloved", and i dnt want you to remove any off your storys (like my other fave athours sammanthanicole and simonexsays) the plot and chracters are almost identical to yours and i am giving you the link just so you can check if you feel offened by this.

i am not doing this to hurt anyone, i just dnt want you to stop making your amazing storys available ofn FP

Story: /s/2687846/1/Stone

Author: /u/6370/lou-la-belle

if i have wasted your time sorry , its just better to check and be safe!

Your story was wonderful. I loved it!

You know what? This is exactly the story I've been searching for in all my time on fanfiction and fictionpress. It's not perverted or grotesque in its romance and that's beautiful.

I've read a bunch of the handsome-badman-kidnaps-resisting-heroine-and-they-fall-into-mad-sexcrazed-lurve. Those were ishy. This one's perfect. This one's a gem :) Keep using your talent.

God bless you.

this chapter made me cry so bad. You are great with connecying to the reader

Wow. Great story! It kept me on edge the whole time! Can't wait to read on!

I am soo dead serious when I type this and I am not joking either. This is the best story out of all the stories I have read on fictionpress and fanfiction I am telling you the truth you know why because you include God in it I am a christian and I love to read stories that include God in it and I gave never read a story that included God in it before because I could hardly find any if you know any stories it would be great appreciated,Even though there are flaws I still love it and I cant wait to read the edited version :D This will always be my first and foremost favorite of all. You are an amazing writer. Keep it up. May God bless you

That was great! And I forgive you for almost killing off Alric...great job! I really hope you go back and edit this because it is an excellent story!

unless Alric comes back to life I will hate you forever...or at least awhile

I feel like I'm nagging...leaving a review every chapter...sorry...

They wouldn't really know the exact date, the calender as it is wasn't established until the enlightenment in 1500...for them it would have been more of seasons and the patterns of the moon then the actual day and months

I forgot to mention this in all the previous chapters where they were taking baths...full on Baths would probably been a no-no, just because in a deteriourating society and their huts its very easy to literally catch your death of cold especially if you were wet...you'd catch some cold or flu and you would die from it because there was no medicine...and his shoulder would probably have not been stitched up, although I don't know alot about the medical practices other then they were primitive.

ignoring the fact that if either Leo or Alaric die I'm going to be furious...

Ethna and Anwen have a conversation...unless you explain some way Ethna knows celtic that I've missed, there is still supposed to be a language difference, and although I think you mention Anwen picking up the saxon language, even if she could understand most of it her language would not be fluent...so yea...

and Leo and Alaric better not die or heads are going to roll...

Oh, I have already guessed ages ago that Alaric would win... :) The ending is simply great!

I dislike Rad not because he is some Big Bad Sicko, but because I have predicted that his fate would be worse than Leo's. :(

Thanks goodness, Deirdre is alright!

I am still bitter over Leo's death, because he is my dream guy... I hope that Deirdre can stay strong, as I am scared that she might self-destruct or whatever out of grief. ((Most of my favourite authors kill off their characters all the time. But I will only feel bitter or sad if the dead character is a well-written one, and not a mere prop.))