Reviews for My Beloved - Original, Unedited Version
singing gravity away chapter 29 . 7/9/2009
Wow! This story was really great! I loved the fact that you incorporated romance and good plot, all the while leaving it clean. I also liked how you had faith in God woven into the story. Good job! These are the types of stories I would like to write! My Beloved is definitely one of my favorites here on Fiction Press. I hope it gets published! It reminds me of something Francine Rivers would write. ) Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
Concerned chapter 29 . 6/21/2009
i love your storys i am a huge fam

i wnt tell you my pen name for my own saftey

i am concerd another author on FP is copying your work "My Beloved", and i dnt want you to remove any off your storys (like my other fave athours sammanthanicole and simonexsays) the plot and chracters are almost identical to yours and i am giving you the link just so you can check if you feel offened by this.

i am not doing this to hurt anyone, i just dnt want you to stop making your amazing storys available ofn FP

Story: /s/2687846/1/Stone

Author: /u/6370/lou-la-belle

if i have wasted your time sorry , its just better to check and be safe!
Lady of Confusion chapter 28 . 6/17/2009
Your story was wonderful. I loved it!
Sasha chapter 18 . 6/15/2009
You know what? This is exactly the story I've been searching for in all my time on fanfiction and fictionpress. It's not perverted or grotesque in its romance and that's beautiful.

I've read a bunch of the handsome-badman-kidnaps-resisting-heroine-and-they-fall-into-mad-sexcrazed-lurve. Those were ishy. This one's perfect. This one's a gem :) Keep using your talent.

God bless you.
pat-the-tap chapter 7 . 6/12/2009
this chapter made me cry so bad. You are great with connecying to the reader
sea.elke chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
Wow. Great story! It kept me on edge the whole time! Can't wait to read on!
ChristianAngel01 chapter 28 . 6/3/2009
I am soo dead serious when I type this and I am not joking either. This is the best story out of all the stories I have read on fictionpress and fanfiction I am telling you the truth you know why because you include God in it I am a christian and I love to read stories that include God in it and I gave never read a story that included God in it before because I could hardly find any if you know any stories it would be great appreciated,Even though there are flaws I still love it and I cant wait to read the edited version :D This will always be my first and foremost favorite of all. You are an amazing writer. Keep it up. May God bless you
Sarahj259 chapter 29 . 5/24/2009
That was great! And I forgive you for almost killing off Alric...great job! I really hope you go back and edit this because it is an excellent story!
Sarahj259 chapter 23 . 5/24/2009
unless Alric comes back to life I will hate you forever...or at least awhile
Sarahj259 chapter 21 . 5/24/2009
I feel like I'm nagging...leaving a review every chapter...sorry...

They wouldn't really know the exact date, the calender as it is wasn't established until the enlightenment in 1500...for them it would have been more of seasons and the patterns of the moon then the actual day and months
Sarahj259 chapter 20 . 5/24/2009
I forgot to mention this in all the previous chapters where they were taking baths...full on Baths would probably been a no-no, just because in a deteriourating society and their huts its very easy to literally catch your death of cold especially if you were'd catch some cold or flu and you would die from it because there was no medicine...and his shoulder would probably have not been stitched up, although I don't know alot about the medical practices other then they were primitive.
Sarahj259 chapter 19 . 5/24/2009
ignoring the fact that if either Leo or Alaric die I'm going to be furious...

Ethna and Anwen have a conversation...unless you explain some way Ethna knows celtic that I've missed, there is still supposed to be a language difference, and although I think you mention Anwen picking up the saxon language, even if she could understand most of it her language would not be yea...

and Leo and Alaric better not die or heads are going to roll...
Icyfire4w5 chapter 28 . 5/23/2009
Oh, I have already guessed ages ago that Alaric would win... :) The ending is simply great!
Icyfire4w5 chapter 27 . 5/23/2009
I dislike Rad not because he is some Big Bad Sicko, but because I have predicted that his fate would be worse than Leo's. :(

Thanks goodness, Deirdre is alright!
Icyfire4w5 chapter 25 . 5/23/2009
I am still bitter over Leo's death, because he is my dream guy... I hope that Deirdre can stay strong, as I am scared that she might self-destruct or whatever out of grief. ((Most of my favourite authors kill off their characters all the time. But I will only feel bitter or sad if the dead character is a well-written one, and not a mere prop.))
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