|Reviews for My Beloved - Original, Unedited Version|
| ebs12 chapter 15 . 8/25/2014
I'm so glad I checked my account - I rarely do anymore but I was really happy to see that you're re-uploading your story. Please continue :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
I just reread the first chapter and I think Alaricis that baby. Nough said.
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/19/2014
OH MY FLIPPING LAWD AH UPDATE RIGHT NOW THIS INSTANT OR I WILL FLIP SHIT. NOT FUNNY LEAVING US ON A CLIFFHANGER AND NOT UPDATING. NOT OKAY.
| mineforkeeps chapter 15 . 8/18/2014
Please keep uploading! I'm loving this story
| Mikanatsume4eva chapter 15 . 8/13/2014
Loved it! XD I started reading this story and couldn't stop- for 9 hours straight! It was unbelievably amazing! I'm glad you decided to keep going. I hope nothing bad happens to Anwen when Alaric leaves...you know...his perverted father.
| Littlechin chapter 15 . 8/12/2014
I'm so happy that you are uploading the old version of My Beloved. It was one of the first stories I ever read on fictionpress and its one of those stories that I feel like throughout the years I never forgot. So excited to reread the rest of the story. It's just as descriptive and well written as I remember.
| ultravioletta chapter 15 . 8/11/2014
Wonderful story! Pls update soon, ok?
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/7/2014
Amazing! Couldn't stop reading it. This story is so could it be a book.
| YTK101 chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Ooohhh! This looks interesting!
| mylittleprincess chapter 15 . 8/6/2014
I hate his father, love the chapter more please :D
| Luti Faube chapter 15 . 8/5/2014
Okay, okay, I couldn't resist reading the new chapters! A wise choice, they are much loved. I really like the way you pace your chapters. There's always a lot of action, yet it never seems too rushed at all. It's also very refreshing that you have quite a few characters and manage to maintain their different personalities incredibly well.
I'm so happy for Deirdre and Leo, and Alaric and Anwen. I think it's interesting how you offer differing opinions on love, marriage and religion, though in the end, the only thing i am really concerned about is a happy ending. Alaric and Leo's father though (can't spell his name or pronounce it) is a really foul character. I hope that sexist pig gets what's coming for him. I mean, I know he'll have another confrontation with Deirdre and Anwen, but hopefully their husbands will be there (who doesn't love a good comfort scene) or he'll be killed.
And to end on a happier note, thank god your story isn't M rated because I think it adds a little more class. Most romance authors with published books that I've read think it has to have sex to show a close relationship, which is fine, but they don't have to graphically describe it. It's a nice touch how you haven't. Looking forward to more!
| IOU1882 chapter 15 . 8/5/2014
Ohhh that sounds interesting! Still hate their bloody jackass of a father though.
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/5/2014
Nooooooooo I want to read more! :)
I absolutely LOVE this story. Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh and thank you for posting two in such a short amount of time.
| violetwriter chapter 15 . 8/5/2014
What a brilliant chapter. Keep up the good editing and work :) great I loved it
| portlandbaby chapter 15 . 8/5/2014
Update soon! I absolutely adore this side of Alaric. He's not weak at all, so he' staying true to his character. It's just the fact that he is allowing himself to be..himself with Anwen. I love that they're already falling for each other. I hope nothing major happens to Alaric. If he gets a few scratches, that's fine. Just no lost legs or anything! Update soon.