Oh... This is REALLY good, imho. Can't wait for another chapter, since I had to read all this in one go. :)

This is shaping up to be a great story. I very much wish you could update with the next chapter today. It's very good.

I do have to say though that my favorite character is the dog. :) No fault in the others, but I love the dog.

Wow. Intense chapter. Good action scenes, definitely well written. Good job! :)

I loved this chapter! Lots of action, and some grief. I feel so bad for what happened, glad that the baby survived at least though. Is Alaric going to catch her in the next chapter? I really want him too, I kind of missed having them both converse and all. Even if their conversing is one of anger and hate - hopefully he'll at least get over some of his anger for what she did, in time. I don't want him to hate her. Anyway, please update soon! I'm seriously too hooked to wait. lol.

-tawnymarie

Okay i am really likiing this story. I am a complete loser and am on this thing all the time. so i have read a lot of stories and i have to say yours is one of the best i have read. It new and different.

will he hold respect for her for being able to do what she did? being able to defend herself?

really love it so far! please update soon! :D

so i wasnt the only one?

lol

u helpd me greatly tho when u gave me the cast list

made every thing make alot more sense

THANK YOU!

hi ... i really like this story...so can u update fast...i want to see what happens next..but dont rush

LOVE IT! wonderfull writing! please continue!

just one thing...i do get who everyone is but is it possible for you to make a character page?

THANK YOU FOR POSTING THE STORY!

thank you for the chapter

thanks for the chapter.

thanks for the chapter

is he beginning to control himself around her to win her?