Reviews for My Beloved - Original, Unedited Version
hopelessromantic0160 chapter 11 . 7/27/2014
This is actually my first time reading this story, and so far I love it. I'm really interested to see how their relationship progresses.

One question though, how long-as in how many chapters-is the completed story?
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
pittstick1 chapter 9 . 7/25/2014
I'm so happy you are putting this back up. I loved this story the first time and in continuing to love it the second time! Thank you for posting it again. I wish you luck in your editing as well :)
bookworm6193 chapter 11 . 7/25/2014
Love it!
IOU1882 chapter 11 . 7/25/2014
Gosh this is so fascinating and so life-like! I love romance and this story portrays it beautifully! Forbidden love is by far my favorite kind. Also, the little conversations that Awen has in her head is very amusing.
Please update soon, this is obviously high quality work! Gosh, I can't wait until their love fully blossoms. I have a feeling that at the end Alaric will kill his father right?
Guest chapter 11 . 7/25/2014
HeyoMyFellowReaders101: you began this story at sixteen? Wow. You definitely have a gift for writing. I must say I'm glad to hear you'll be updating about every day. So many stories often don't update until some time has passed from the previous update. Thank you for not being that author.

Can't wait for the next chapter! It's getting really good.
smrae chapter 11 . 7/25/2014
You handles the guest review very well! Honestly I'm really enjoying the story. Especially the historical accuracy you incorporate into your writing which is no easy thing. I look forward to your updates everyday! Thank you!
Guest chapter 11 . 7/25/2014
This is very well written and well planned out! I'm glad you've kept her hatred so present, as most would rush to the romance and leave the story extremely implausible. I look forward to reading the rest, as well as the edited version, once you've finished with it! Thanks so much for an interesting read!
violetwriter chapter 9 . 7/25/2014
A lot of people would say how on earth would you come to like a man that killed your family. But then you have to remember that it is set in an era where people subjected to the brutality of war all the time. Any proof of kindness would have been a startling and significant change for someone like Anwen. I believe Alaric is more complicated than we thought and nothing is black and white. He may have been a beast, but he did not participate in the slaying of children and women and as a prince he would have been expected to. I like the fact that there is more than what meets the eye. Alaric is like an onion (like in Shrek) there are many layers to him. So well done for showing the different emotions between the two main characters and showing how it is humanly possible to forgive those that have wronged you the most and even come to love them. I hope to see more chapters :)
DevourtheStars chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
Are you going to be uploading the rest of the story? I am getting confused
story chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
This is well written but wtf! There is no way on this earth that a young girl and that is what she is even in those times would ever come to have softer feelings for her mother's murderer and that is what he is even if he is sorry after there is no taking the action back. I am in one way enjoying your writing as it is well written but finding it hard going in another way as it is so unbelievable. every great story i have read has always had the smallest grain of the "it could happen or be" but not in this one. Yes maybe she could have gotten over the violence of the battle as i surmise that is how her father died but in your story he put an unarmed defenceless woman to death infront of her child. That is not the act of an honourable warrior but a savage unfeeling beast. you write that he feels the desire to protect her from pain yet he has dealt her the most severe blow of all there could only be one worse and that is the death of a child! He said she looks so young well fssht she is a child he's forced into marriage. Now you have her desiring him! In this age it would be called stockholm syndrome, a self defence mechanism for servival not true feelings.
bulletproof.cupid chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
And the conflict continues! I do wonder how she'll manage with him off to subdue the rebel forces, and her alone in the village to fend off whatever it is. It might just actually spark a little respect for him and what he does to protect her! On a side note, I am beginning to adore his older brother! Thank you for the super fast updates! Hope you're doing well x
violetwriter chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
Very good sooo far. I love the conflicting emotions! I think she may come to love him in an obscure way :) keep writing
Guest chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
HeyoMyFellowReaders101 here. I absolutely adore your story. It went from dark and very depressing with no hope except for the spark in Anwen's eyes to something beautiful. Alaric became this amazing person the right way; his character development was absolutely perfect. I love the two together, despite the beef between them. I know Alaric is starting to love her and as much as Anwen doesn't want to admit it, she's starting to love him too. Update soon!
bookworm6193 chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
Love it!
bookworm6193 chapter 9 . 7/24/2014
Gah I'm so excited! Love it!
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