Reviews for My Beloved - Original, Unedited Version |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is fantastic. I know you haven't updated in a long time, but this is the best story I've read on FictionPress handsdown. I'm entranced. |
![]() ![]() UPDATE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was just wndering if you ever planned on updating, because I think that your story is extremely well written and original. |
![]() ![]() I know you say that you're editing but it's been a couple of years, will you please upload the original? Pretty please with a cherry on top? :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why do you have only posted three chapters? Is it not complete? :-( Great story so far! Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hoped that she can escape! But unfortunately not... :-( Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Really interesting idea and plotting! I hope, you'll continue your story! ;-) Mira |
![]() ![]() ![]() Despite the fact that you don't have the full story on this story it has already captivated my heart. I love that Anwen's want and desire is so clear, I also admire her strength in this situation. She is very strong willed and I liked the fact that she didn't simply give up when she was captured, she fought several times to escape (despite them being futile). Another character I found extremely interesting is Alaric, I don't like what he has done (killing her family), however, you can tell that he is truly intrigued by Anwen. I would wish that continue this story on your site and really consider publishing because this a story I would buy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For the love of desperate readers crazy about this story, PLEASE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! You have such potential and it is saddening to see people just stop. You have more reviews in a couple chapters than anybody could ever dream of. |
![]() ![]() Any chance of you finishing this story? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really good. Very well written. The characters are believable and real. The plot is really good. Sorry it won't be updated on here anymore. Haveing someone steal your writing sucks. I'm sorry it happened to you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all I would like to say this story is amazing, I loved the chracters especially Anwen, i love how she is so strong and determined and Alaric's character as well, he sounds fit lol,that's really bad that ur story had been plagiarized, ill e-mail u and hopefully u will send me the password...:) |