|Reviews for You Let Me Go Too Far|
| REDh04x chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
I was always a fan of your writing.
This has as much impact as ever, and it still leaves me amazed.
| LeLa London chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
wow, dartxni throughout your poem is filled with so much angst and feeling. i think if you didn't write that last stanza i would've understood that you were telling your heart not to fall in lust/love. the fact that you did emphasizes your point at your desperation for your heart to listen however. wonderful effort.