Reviews for The ABC's of Jack Sanders
Mitchie chapter 2 . 1/17/2009
Hahaha! How ironic that she would embarrass herself by smacking her butt against a candy machine in front of her crush. Classic! Brilliant!

Really good chapter again! Can't wait for another update...hopefully sooner? Keep it up!

clumsy.carrie chapter 2 . 1/16/2009
really great, please continue! i love this type of story.
clumsy.carrie chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
lol despite the note at the end of the chapter, I love brother's best friend cliches. they're the very best ever.

:] this is a great story and I hope you continue this till the end.

DawnAwakens chapter 2 . 1/15/2009
I LIKE THIS STORY :) Keep going with it & UPDATE SOON
GirlwhoeatflowersConnie chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
omg! i love the story! i've never realized how talended you are, kelly!

hold on a second... am i posting a review on the first chapter? oh. yeah, i am. oh well, since you like the reviews, then i'll post another one for chapter 2 as well! :D

btw, ending part was so cute! aww love it love it!
forever.ephemeral chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
i finished reading chapter two yesterday but i didn't get a chance to review b/c of hw. haha..

anyways, i liked this chapter. so much trouble for some candy. XD but i can kinda relate since i was in the same situation one time. [first time i used a vending machine and it didn't]

i'll try reviewing every chapter, but if i can't, just know that i AM reading every single one.

update as soon as possible! [please]
DeeDee Lynette chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
Ooh. That was a good chapter. (This is Burning Apathy, by the way.) I really like the lidea of Del having a different guy that she actually likes instead of just her not liking anyone. And I gottat say, I absolutely LOVE Jack as a character. :D He's such a cutie. Anyways, good job and I'll be awaiting the next chapter.

. DeeDee .
StrandedOnYou chapter 2 . 1/14/2009

great chapter, i freakin love the parts where shes kicking the machine

i do that almost everyday!


your doing so good and its only been 2 chapters

you go girl D

Draven in Wonderland chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
YAY! I am glad you decided to continue on with the story.

I really like this chapter. you are a very talented writer.

Hope you update again soon. :)
SlightlyBizarre chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
I just found out about your story yesterday to tell you the truth and i never got a chance to to and respond to your second chapter which was posted yesterday... you see i read your story in my computer class which i am in right now at the moment... haha... i just did my Final and man that was boring. But i read the second chapter today and i absolutely love it!

I really cant wait to read more.

I like the plot you have set up and yeah it may be cliche but like i said before you add your own spice. I mean there are so may other writers out there who write cliche stories and your just extremely tired of reading the identical story but i would have to say no, yours is not identical. so bravo :D

I write sometimes without even thinking much about the plot either so your not the only one :D

well class is about to end and i really want to say that i love it and i hope you update as soon as you can :D
jenjen-0 chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
Haha, lol, let's try and see how many cliches you can put in one story! Loved it :D And oh god, the spaghetti hanging from Chris' ear just made me burst out laughing. Good thing I'm home alone :P

As long as you don't take a month to get up the next update I'll be fine!
EsiuoL chapter 2 . 1/14/2009

That was hilarious!

I enjoyed this a lot.

Please please update soon!
seeking stardom chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
Hahahahahahaha! OMG! I don't think I EVER laughed so much when I read a story! Hahahahaha! How embarassing!

Anywho... I DO love Jack *Sigh* and I think Colin is about to steal my heart too *Double sigh*.

PLEASE UPDATE LIKE YOU PROMISED! Or I WILL hunt you down and have your stories for breakfast...Oh, wait. No can do. I already had breakfast, and eating paper? Yeah, SO not good for your health even though I DID try some once. The pain in my stomach was unbearable.

Damn, I'll have to find another threat...


Izzey chapter 2 . 1/13/2009
this is hilarious! lol. please update again asap!
Knowledge is Power chapter 2 . 1/13/2009
it was alright. kind of funny, but not really. i still atand by my first review.
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