Reviews for Who else do you hate? |
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jane1313 chapter 1 . 12/25/2008 I liked the subject of this poem. It touches on a lot of complex issues, and I could really empathise with you. I think it could flow better; some of the lines felt to long. But if you wrote it when you were upset/angry that would tend to happen. I liked the way you turned it at the end. From anger, to love and confusion. The question in the last line was ver effective. |
Sharks chapter 1 . 12/15/2008 Wow. That was fantastic. 10/10 Good for you, writing this. |