|Reviews for Throw Me Down|
| Sushi chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Hm. Now I have 'Drink Up Me Hearties' in my head...
And I actually know the whole song!
| Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I liked the topic. Pirate poems. Hahaha.
I also liked this because of the imagery that went along.
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| lael1bologna chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
cool. i liked your thyme, it waz awesome!
| Cesalie Chase chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Wow, this is really different. You've done a great job with the meter and descriptive diction - it flows really nicely and, unlike some rhyming poetry, isn't cheesy or cliche. (That is, I didn't feel as though you'd just flipped through a rhyming dictionary, looking for a word that would work well with "teeth.")
I also really like the fact that you've taken on the persona of one of your characters, writing the way she would. It's a great exercise - and it makes for some really interesting pieces, like this one. Excellent work. I'd be interested in reading the story behind it!