Reviews for That's a party
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
"in the backside"... did you mean back seat?

"All smell like sex"... Past tense so it should be smelled and all sounds odd. Maybe Everything would be better?

"the rest in history..."

"Just waking’up without knowin’ a shit,"... waking up

Definitely different from most of your pieces. I liked the tone really light hearted. Made it almost like a fun piece... lol.
Natalie-Rayne chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Totally B.A! I love it! Hardcore and interesting, if not totally the shiz!
A Little Less Than Dust chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Very hardcore song. Thank you for reviewing my poem, "out of tune," ... i'm gonna keep readin your stuff

please keep writing!
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
etwas drastisch in der Wortwahl, aber ich kann es mir gut als Song vorstellen