Reviews for Memories Collide
MasterPlanDELETED chapter 2 . 2/3/2009
Oh my, this took me long enough to R&R...Sorry for that!

Now concerning the chapter, it was a lovely one. I mean, nothing much happened except for the end (not much action I mean...) but it kind of helps us to understand the main character better. I really loved that part: "It startled her when the item fell, and she found herself mesmerized..." The whole scene leaves a wonderful feeling (for me, at least...) - some kind of calmness. I really loved it...

Anyway, I think this was a pretty good chapter and I'm looking forward for the next one!


MasterPlanDELETED chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Hehe Nice story! I still can't believe this was written by two persons, it flows so fluently and it has no evidence of being written by more than one person. Good job! I'm waiting for the next chapter!

593976 chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Wow, very intriguing! I like the "flashbacks." It's like a puzzle, and it's fun to read. And Im excited to hear more about Chris. :)

dreamer6 chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
I like this story! It seems different, and I'm interested to see where you'll take it! ]