Reviews for All I Want For Christmas |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was so beautiful! I'm even proud of Adrienne for backing off and accepting that she couldn't compete. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story, it's so well written and it drew me in. I could tell that you liked One Tree Hill with the fashion website that developed into a full fledged company and with her mother taking control over the company. That is Brooke's life, yes? |
![]() ![]() when we find out shes a designer and that tylers fiance asked her to make her wedding dress- for some reason that really reminds me of parent trap and also the fact that shes a designer and head of her own compny with her mom acting as CEO reminds me of brook from one tree hill |
![]() ![]() I'd like to start by saying that your story does have some nice ideas. An ex-girlfriend with a child could create some interesting drama, however, I am not a fan of the direction you followed. Quite honestly it felt like you were attempting to rip of the parent trap and combine it rather obviously with 'one tree hill'. Perhaps try to be a little more original next time. The characters had little depth and I felt worse for Adrienne than Isabella. You also seem to have a tendency to repeat yourself, in a previous chapter you wrote 'sick' approximately five times in two short paragraphs. I apologise for being a little harsh, it's just an opinion for you to take as you choose. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. wat a cute ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES YES YES YES YES! Adrienne and Tyler are no more! WHOHO! Makes me a happy girl! You know how i mentioned before how it makes me think of oth? I was wondering if adrienne would be the one to call off the wedding (like lindsey did to lucas). but, at least adrienne did it before they were standing at the altar, and tyler said i do. and thank god hes getting back together with Bella! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! this story is pretty good and i cant wait for Adam and chantal's update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so sweet. cant wait for the next story about adam n chantal |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally adrienne came to her sense. i always wan isa n tyler to be together |
![]() ![]() ![]() i believe tylor will regret for marrying adrienne. i hope he will make the correct decision |
![]() ![]() ![]() so... i'm thinking i must have ESP or something... why? you may ask?... well, it all starts with this story that i am addicted too. it had been awhile since there had been an update (although i should really be one to talk), and one day i thought 'hm... i really need an All I Want for Christmas fix...' and what do you know... I GOTS IT! ;) totally made my day girl! so thank you :] i love Chantal... so sneaky, but yet it's with the best of intentions. she and everyone else - sans Isabella's control freak of a mother and Adrienne the Annoying - can see that Bella and Tyler BELONG together. it's only a matter of time before they give in to the feelings they still harbor for each other, and give adorable Noah the family he wants and deserves. YAY for Bella finally having the inner strength to stand up for herself against her mother. and for firing the bitch too! made me a contented reader :] cant wait for more :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really hate maureen. how can she be so cruel to her own daughter? |
![]() ![]() waa! love your story, can't wait for the next chapter. D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have no idea how excited I was to see that you had updated! *jumps for joy* I loved the chapter! I want Isabella and Tyler to get even closer...and for him to FINALLY dump Adrienne. Can't wait for the next update... I know how it gets with such busy schedules! |
![]() ![]() ![]() obviously tyler is still in love with isabella. adrienne shld have realised by now. i hope tyler will face his feelings soon |