Reviews for Dessert
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
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Hah, I really like this! I had to read it three times. The first I was captivated by the imagery (lovely, by the way). The second I found the "super salad? / the soup or salad" unbearably entertaining. The third, I focused on the first stanza - the whole idea of WHY she cannot seem to think straight. :P Very nicely put together. Kudos.

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Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
I love this [:

So simplistic, realistic, and well-written.