|Reviews for Origin of Heartbreak|
| DarkRose1593 chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
Oh my gosh, this was so sad it made my stomach hurt and makes me want to cry! :'0 Good idea for a myth, though.
| Silvermoon of Forestclan chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
this story.. its so sad... i really like your writing (just read another two by you).
| MagicWords chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
That was sad but it was a good tale! Nicely written!
Nice work! Keep it up!