Reviews for Fake
Kir Sirin chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Wow I'm typing on my iPod and I will give you a better review than three terms.

So, this has nothing to do with the story but you just gave me the perfect idea for this essay contest I was dying to win...

Anyways.

This was very raw and real. I also loved how you used the same phrasing in your pillow book, as if you had this oneshot in your mind when you were typing it up. The careful wording, afraid to reveal too much but not wanting to take the full force away from the moment, was absolutely perfect. It barely scratched the surface of both sides but showed enough to give the reader something to hold onto and think over later.

Beautiful job.

Even if it was a shattering experience. I appreciated it.
Aeristella chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
That is deep.