|Reviews for A mistake I can't forget|
| this wild abyss chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
This, at least for me, is a very relatable poem. I enjoyed the emotion you added, though I thought you could have put a few simile/metaphor type techniques in to liven up your word choice. But other than that, this poem was very nice.
| Someone-Whos-Not-Important chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Oh that is sad...Very sad. Now I am sad. But that is good because that mean you rock. I just wish you didnt cause than I would still be happy... But thanks! lol