Reviews for Ashes in the Brook
Rachel chapter 18 . 2/19/2011
Woman! You haven't updated since 2009! you MUST update soon! i love the story but i gota be able to read more of it! *insert puppy dog eyes here* pleeasse?/
buznuz1 chapter 18 . 7/31/2010
Love it! please update! I know it's been like 7 months, but we still all LOVE this story! and really want to see it finished!
IdiosyncraticGrrl666 chapter 18 . 6/6/2010
Hi! I wanna read more, and I'd love it if you updated. PWEEZES? (Sorry, I'm a bit hyper.) But, hi, update please. It's AMAZING. And I wanna know about Ashton's past. You keep referencing it, but it never really comes up. He winced when his dad's name was mentioned. Was his dad abusive? Or is he dead? Or what? :D Please update.
Kiss of the Oblivious chapter 18 . 2/27/2010
I agree with other reviewers who have said that that addition with Jasmine was weird. It's not that I don't like her, I think she just could have done better as an added character rater than a whole new protagonist and to be honest I was becoming rather attached and accustomed to Mika. A feeling that I haven't feel with Jasmine. I hope you continue to write this story. I would hate to see it die off.
noodlez chapter 16 . 1/26/2010

I just found your story today, and hope you don't mind if I add my input. I enjoyed the story at the start, however, once you added Jasmine's POV...the story became weird and choppy. I think it would have been better if it was just Ashton and Mika only. Or that Jasmine's character should not start out so strongly-makes her seem a little bossy and arrogant. Well, that is just my two cents. I would've liked to continue reading the story, but I probably will not because of the addition character. Thank you for taking the time to write.
book-geek chapter 18 . 1/25/2010
heyy, i just started reading AITB, and i was kinda sad when u switched between Mika and Jasmine, i think u could have done more with Mika, though i do like the Jasmine part.

update soon (:
dontneedyou chapter 18 . 12/4/2009
I like this story! Though, why did you change main characters? And I thought for sure that Mika would end up with Ashton. Did you change your mind? And my birthday is on April, 25. Ahaaha!

Update soon!

Pixie-Jazz101 chapter 15 . 8/23/2009
its not a bad thing!

Jasmine is more out going and i would love to be here and kick som Tyler ass! lol

but i also want to be mika because i want to get with Ashton hehe!

but still Jasmine cause i wanna kick some ass! ;)
righthere431 chapter 18 . 8/12/2009
Ohoho so Jasmine likes Ashton hehe cute.
ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 18 . 8/2/2009
hey, nice to see your updates(finally!) about this chapter,well it was pretty good...but there's something which is wrong here...i havnt been able to pinpoint it yet but i'll let u know when i do. overall i liked it. hopefully you'll be able to update sooner next time.
Shady Spiral chapter 18 . 7/31/2009
This is getting even better! Everyone has a secret! Its very intriguing!
KMx0x chapter 18 . 7/31/2009

I wonder what the whole story is about her parents death.o:

Update soon.


Shady Spiral chapter 7 . 7/31/2009
I really like this story as far as I've read. Its really interesting, and very well-written.

However, I have to ask...She had a presentation on John Lenin? Do you mean John Lennon, musical genius and founder of the Beatles, assassinated in 1980. Or Vladimir Lenin, Bolshevik and first head of the USSR? 'Cause that's a big difference there D
aruhdnis chapter 18 . 7/31/2009
Hehehe, betcha can guess who this is! Hahaha, did Mika really lose her crush on Ashton. Hm... Hahaha, this was kind of a laugh out loud chapter Love the maybe I was the one that need a psych part! :)
Hemii25 chapter 18 . 7/31/2009
I KNEW Jasmine liked Ashton! It's so cute how she was trying to deny it too XD. Update soon!
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