Reviews for Ashes in the Brook
righthere431 chapter 17 . 7/14/2009
Oh gosh don't burn your house down!
righthere431 chapter 16 . 7/14/2009
Aww I hate it when you try to help people too but they don't appreciate it.
ishaniacuinatum.ashley chapter 17 . 7/14/2009
brilliant chapter...good work!


Lunary Canary chapter 17 . 7/13/2009
Well. That was awesome XD
Hemii25 chapter 17 . 7/13/2009
Haha, i know how she feels I can't cook for my life. Update soon! Please!
Hemii25 chapter 16 . 7/13/2009
I hate detention so that's going to suck for her, but i think she'll make it out alive lol. I get two chapters yay!
Blossoming Hibiscus chapter 17 . 7/13/2009
That was the quickest you've like, ever updated! (I think.) Yay! :) Um...not much else 2 say I gues...
RoGo chapter 14 . 7/12/2009
why did she ask what period she had lunch? lunch is at the same time for everybody
Lunary Canary chapter 16 . 7/11/2009
what if jasmine starts to like nate? well...Mika would get a little mad.
ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 16 . 7/11/2009
OMG!OMG!please please bring on the next chapter soon...

oh n i hope there's a fight where Jasmine kicks Tyler's ass...real .

do do do update soon.



ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 15 . 7/11/2009
man,this girl ROCKS!...seriously,i love her!...she's just everything Mika should've been...



ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 13 . 7/11/2009
hm...intersting...very different from Mika, i see...
ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 11 . 7/11/2009
worth .lol.

nice're really good at making people cry it seems...I'll be needing your help with my story, you know...

the part where Nate becomes good and then, plain dumps her again really broke me...

you're really really good.


ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 9 . 7/11/2009 made me emotional on the last line...

still reading...


ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 8 . 7/11/2009
hey, last chapter was awesome...

this one was cool as well...but i never thought ashton would go out with Lauren!

...reading on...


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