Reviews for Ashes in the Brook |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh gosh don't burn your house down! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I hate it when you try to help people too but they don't appreciate it. |
![]() ![]() brilliant chapter...good work! ishani xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. That was awesome XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, i know how she feels I can't cook for my life. Update soon! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate detention so that's going to suck for her, but i think she'll make it out alive lol. I get two chapters yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was the quickest you've like, ever updated! (I think.) Yay! :) Um...not much else 2 say I gues... |
![]() ![]() ![]() why did she ask what period she had lunch? lunch is at the same time for everybody |
![]() ![]() ![]() what if jasmine starts to like nate? well...Mika would get a little mad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG!OMG!please please bring on the next chapter soon... oh n i hope there's a fight where Jasmine kicks Tyler's ass...real . do do do update soon. luv ishani xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() man,this girl ROCKS!...seriously,i love her!...she's just everything Mika should've been... GO JAS!GO! ishani xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm...intersting...very different from Mika, i see... |
![]() ![]() ![]() worth .lol. nice chapter...you're really good at making people cry it seems...I'll be needing your help with my story, you know... the part where Nate becomes good and then, plain dumps her again really broke me... you're really really good. ishani xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...you made me emotional on the last line... still reading... ishani xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, last chapter was awesome... this one was cool as well...but i never thought ashton would go out with Lauren! ...reading on... ishani xx |