Reviews for Ashes in the Brook
ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 5 . 7/11/2009

i especially liked the last chapter...and i know the kind of pain one goes through when their best friend ditches them (and turn in arch enemies)...had happened to me...but luckily i got some new friends who are like,the best in the world...they helped me get over it...

anyway, about this chapter... i liked it...Ashton and Mika ARE so cute together... :D

keep up the good work!


ishaniacuinatum.ashley chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
nice beginning...very interesting...


Blossoming Hibiscus chapter 16 . 7/11/2009
Yay! You updated! I'm proud of you! We didn't name her Rose because Roses aren't purely sweet, every Rose has it's thorns. However, after reading this chapter, I think Rose would've worked. She did kind of expose a thorn. Blow up. Stick a thorn in Nate. Poor Nate. Make sure you update quickly this time! You take much too long! And sorry doesn't work! :) So Yep...
SweSwa chapter 12 . 7/9/2009
Im gonna miss Mikas pov ] haha I loved her storyy. nd u! of course I would say that but nyways im gonna go read Jasmines pov story now :) review in a little bit
SweSwa chapter 11 . 7/9/2009
Ah! i love this chapter so much... ] im so happy lauren and ashton broke up! yay :D but thats so sweet of him cuz he came up and comforted Mika when she was crying after Nate just left her in the middle of the dance floor. i feel so bad for her... i love you
SapphireofMystery chapter 15 . 6/30/2009
ShineLikeAStar chapter 15 . 6/26/2009
Great story! I'm really interested to see where this will go.
ShineLikeAStar chapter 4 . 6/26/2009
Okay, so I had to leave a review just for chapter four, because I wanted to tell you that I LOVE that quote! Life's not about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain. I found it like a week ago on some website and put it on my MySpace haha, which I thought was completely ironic! Anyways, I love this story so far, and I'm gonna keep reading now!
righthere431 chapter 15 . 6/25/2009
Ahaha I like Jasmine!
KMx0x chapter 15 . 6/22/2009
I love this story.


I like Jasmine more than Mika too.

She's just more, spontaneous. I guess.

Update soon!


Blossoming Hibiscus chapter 15 . 6/19/2009

Guess who!


Yay, you finally updated!
Lunary Canary chapter 15 . 6/19/2009
Wow. Impressive.

I finished reading all 15 chapters, they were AWESOME!

Continue on my friend, Jasmine is hysterical.
HelgaBertoni chapter 15 . 6/18/2009
Loved it, update soon!
Hemii25 chapter 15 . 6/18/2009
AH! I LUV Jasmine and all her "I'm gunna beat you up" attitude. I'm so glad SOMEBODY stuck up for Mika. I'm starting to warm up to her mor but i'm not sure i like her more than Mika. But yeah... I see it in the later future, Jasmine and Ashton (lil birdy told me) And as for your PM, No biggie.
iluvwolfy chapter 15 . 6/18/2009
i wanna noe wat will happen to Mika and Ashton.! great story thou. Keep writing some more
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