Reviews for Hole in My Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful and full of meaning. I really liked it. :) ~RosePetal~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, you did a wonderful job! On another note...This totally sums up all of my relationships! D: Don't you hate that feeling? |
![]() ![]() ![]() their there but that's the nitpicky typo review. Here's the real review: BEAUTIFUL ENDING! You're getting really good! I wasn't sure it was going to end well from the beginning, but you pleasantly surprised me. Although the beginning isn't bad, it definitely has the potential to be better. I think that's where you need to focus in your writing improvement, because your endings are fabulous. Love, ~Dia |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know what you mean. You just build up everything around them and then they're just gone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ugh...relationships are good until the end. then they suck! |