Reviews for Hole in My Heart
BlackRosesFreedom chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Beautiful and full of meaning. I really liked it. :)

JGPoetry chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Again, you did a wonderful job! On another note...This totally sums up all of my relationships! D: Don't you hate that feeling?
DiaRose chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
their there but that's the nitpicky typo review.

Here's the real review: BEAUTIFUL ENDING! You're getting really good! I wasn't sure it was going to end well from the beginning, but you pleasantly surprised me. Although the beginning isn't bad, it definitely has the potential to be better. I think that's where you need to focus in your writing improvement, because your endings are fabulous.


Alice Blake LeFevre chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
I know what you mean. You just build up everything around them and then they're just gone.
BoReD tO dEaTh chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
ugh...relationships are good until the end. then they suck!