|Reviews for Beside You|
| Anon chapter 10 . 2/28
I think it's funny that the girls gift each other thousand(s) dollar items and Whitney gives her baby daddy a watch that's barely a hundred dollars for Christmas lol. It's a nice fluffy read:) I can't help but think that Whitney is kind of on the dull side though:/ I don't really love anything in particular about her character unfortunately
| FairyTaleDreams chapter 22 . 12/13/2013
Wow. Loved the story :) I mean, you kept it happy and without drama in the relationship while at the same time never losing the reader's interest. Some really nifty writing! Hope you keep writing.
| macy8 chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
great story so far
| Guest chapter 22 . 3/31/2013
amazing story! ive read all of yours and this one is a very close second to money well spent! i really hope you continue the sequal of that one!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
the 'bitches' being every second word is really obnoxious, and annoying to read.
| xDangerousLovex chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Very interesting summary. I'm very excited to see where this story goes. Can't wait to finish it!
| Me chapter 22 . 1/5/2012
| Dreamzzdreamer chapter 22 . 1/3/2012
Suuuch split feelings on the story!
Overall, loved it! Right from the beginning I was caught and hooked just as with your other stories.
But there were times I was shaking my head. It was a mix of The Hangover (the word 'Bitches' was used a bit much), and then Juno (ditto the word 'nugget'), and then something from a sitcom like Days of Our Lives.
Very funny throughout.
At times it was too repetitive, a bit up/down in the emotions (then again, she was pregnant...) and I'd even say over descriptive (ie: 'the pad of his thumb wiped the tear from my cheek.' etc was used a lot). Plus, all the label dropping.
Sometimes I felt like Whitney's character was not very defined. Was she the party girl, or the demure country girl, or the intelligent editor. I feel the editor role was underplayed and that her lines/dialogue didn't follow with her given intelligence.
Between you and your amazing beta Ally (who's stories I've read. Huge thanks!) the grammar and everything ran together pretty well although there were a few spots I noticed mistakes (I'm wishing now I could remember them) but they were very minor and very few.
Also, chapter's ran a bit long. Usually I prefer the long ones, but whew-ie! Some were a doozy.
Once again, I reallllly did love the story, just some offering some (hopefully) editor in training advice.
I'm definitely keeping you in my favorite author's section and look forward to seeing more!
Best of luck with all your Nursing schooling, and career!
| Megan-Winter chapter 2 . 12/30/2011
"Oh, and we kicked the Cubbie's cursed asses last night."
I just want to say that this quote made my day. GO CARDS!
| weeeangie chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
whenever i read your story, it reminds me of thanksgiving so i decided to read it on thanksgiving :D lol!
| Kiveda chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
HOW MANY TIMES CAN YOU POSSIBLY SAY THE WORD "BITCHES"?
sorry, im gonna keep reading but i had to get that outa my system!
| GoNe RoGuE chapter 5 . 8/24/2011
This story is awesome and geez is there a lot of swearing, it's like me! Hehe
| LinKat chapter 22 . 7/25/2011
I had a hard time putting down the window when I needed to get stuff done.
Keep up the good work!
| killerqueen123 chapter 22 . 3/31/2011
I know I didn't review for every chapter... sorry ... it's a bad habit of mine to do that with finished stories... Anyways I loved this story it was amazing. Ima go check out your other stories now :)
| christinaxxyo chapter 22 . 2/25/2011
Nice job :) it was really interesting reading a story from a pregnant woman's perspective.