I've read many stories on this site, and yours is by far the most impressive! It has the best story line, characterizations, and plot. I wish others would take writing lessons from you. I hope to find more stories from you! Great Job!

OMGOMGOMG I LOVED THIS! So much humour, fluff, suspense and other good stuff. I'm still swooning a little, but really, the chemistry between characters, all of them, not just Whitney and Ty is AMAZING. I love it that you didn't shy away from using swearwords, it made characters pop out from the page. Well that and their funny antics :D Especially Lily, she's awesome. Oh and, I'm beyond glad that epilogue wasn't about their wedding (I hate it when the epilogue is just the wedding, it's not like we didn't get they would marry from the happy ending in the previous chapter). All in all, love your writing style and will definitely check out your other story (:

this was a great story. thanks for writing. *~*kay

i really liked it - it was so sweet!

charlotte

well this review is coming awfully late considering you are finished with this story. I loved it. I am glad someone wrote a happily ever after for a one night stand. that was how my firstborn came into the worl and landed the most wonderful man as a husband. I can really relate to ur story. you have defininately earned kudos! I am also adding u to my favorite authors.

hi! okay wowe! i loved ur story so much...lol i swear in every chapter i read i cracked up like a crazy person...my dad was seriously contimlating my sanity...ur chapters were soo long but if it was another auther they wouldnt have been able to keep it interesing. it didnt drag oon nor did it get boring. great job! and for ur greatness i wish u well in college i know it sucks!

first up, i just wanted to say i'm really sorry. i read this story earlier last week and decided to come back and review it later coz i was a bit busy. now i regret having made that choice since i've forgotten the finite details that i wanted to comment on. don't worry though, i still remember what happened in the story and everything. the downside is though, that this review will be unlike my usual ones where i leave long lists of things to edit and a detailed comment about the characters and plot developments that i liked. those are usually indicators of how much i loved the story. but this time i gotta say i know i really loved this story coz i didn't even bother writing down the grammatical errors/typos, i was too engrossed in the story. and any little errors didn't stand in the way of the rhythm of the story, like many i've come across. i liked how you structured this story. although whitney and ty got together fairly early, you managed to make it seem realistic and i liked how they continued to have an interesting dynamic that kept me entertained. i'm also astonished that you managed to write a story of this scope in just a mere 22 chapters. you have awesome skills condensing your work. i have awful troubles with that sometimes. the only thing i didn't particularly agree with was how you dealt with the crazy stalker. i think it was a bit anticlimactic. i would've liked it if you had kind of made the end of that particular plot development a bit more dramatic. after all, she did kinda torture the normalcy of their lives. also, you mentioned accomplices. there definitely had to have been someone on the inside since she managed to get their home number and email and all that, unless you're just going to play the whole 'she was around at whitney's work that's where she got all the info' line. it would've been a really interesting turn if you had explored the angle of someone close betraying them and how they dealt with that betrayal. hope this doesn't sound too criticising. i honestly did really love this story. i hope that at a later time, i'll be able to re-read this story and give you a proper review. i started this story wanting something just to quickly entertain myself with some free time but you really pulled through and gave me a seriously exciting read. thanks HEAPS. :)

jess

Awesome Story! :)

still reading...this story is rocking

Gah... can't believe it is over! I love the wrap up... puts everything in place and wraps it all up nicely... Love it!

xoxo

jennie

They even do it in steady intervals... one every four years :P

Lovely story. I enjoyed it

nice work on burning up the lasagna :D great chapter. I know you just finished your story, but I'm only getting started on reading it. ;) can't wait to read more of your work

Aw that was cute, and I love the name Elijah. :D

this is so sweet. i like the ending very much. wat will your next work be about?

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