Reviews for Good Ol' Aphrodite |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! its me again. ijust wanted to say that it sucks to have people stealing yur work, but i really hope you don't leave fictionpress.i lurve this story and to see mel and luke get together.I don't have any ideas right now but if i do think of any i'll definitley tell you! Toodles for now(: A Novel Place |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh this story already has me hooked,pretty please don't stop writing!I hope mel and luke get together, i also love Mel's outburst and the ay she talk, i jut pick up a ally fun vibe from her so please keep writing with love, A NovelPlace |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story! Mixed a good cliche (brother's best friend) with my fave type of Gods... The Greek Gods. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so i did start reading this when you had the first draft up. but i like this much better. not saying that the last one was bad or anything, i just like this one more :] can't wait to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the story now that you've re-written it. It just flows better. I really like it! Keep going with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! There are a few typos though, but other than that, it's awesome! Is Luke some sort of God or something too? Because that would be so cool... More Luke action please! x |
![]() ![]() ![]() ur story is refreshing and funny i can't help but laugh at it i esp like Apollo here, don't know why update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Luke half god or something or mortal? COOL STORY! Update FAST amd MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay i love it. but stop reposting it already! geeze. this is like the third time. just add more to it. i love it. and post more. |
![]() ![]() i love this story very creative twist on things. i have it bookmarked and everything.. good job with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it so far, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an awesome story! you're a great writer. i really like all the character's personalities. update update update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what happened to the other chapter? i could have sworn that there was a third chapter about Mel and Mitch Zeus's place. its kind of weird how Mel and Mitch just left the city that fast to go visit their grandfather, Mel just left in the middle of showing Luke around. i can't wait to see where the story goes. heart ya ES |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! I like this. Monkeys and hippos, huh? That's a pretty evil insult. Anyways. UPDATE QUICKLY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh, this is really good! very original and different! i like it!(: |