Reviews for Kastor Chronicles 1: The Forge of Dawn
Thevina chapter 8 . 3/24
Oh, the feels! Love finding out more about Kastor's past, Mikah's past, and so much with the Kyri culture. The world you've made is so compelling. I know I've said that a lot.
Thevina chapter 6 . 3/24
I feel a bit like Mikah and want to say, "You amazing author, my undoing." I'm in your story's thrall! And I don't want to leave. Ever. :)
Thevina chapter 5 . 3/24
"My dissolution." AHHHHHHH. It's Mikah/Kastor in a succinct phrase of gloriousness. I love your story!
Thevina chapter 4 . 3/24
Every chapter of this story brings new levels and depth to your world, and I'm more and more enraptured! It's like a reverse onion. The more I read, the more the world lives and breathes and I don't want to keep reading because if I do, eventually I will come to the end and I don't want there to be an end. I may well end up writing some fanfic!
Thevina chapter 3 . 3/23
I'm so smitten with the dynamics of ALL of your characters! It's all so alive and vivid and creative and engaging and irrepressible and amazing. I'm doing a writerly swoon.
Thevina chapter 2 . 3/23
I'm only two chapters into your story and I feel like I've made a new best friend. I was thinking of doing other things tonight that weren't reading your story, and I had this phrase go through my head: "I just can't quit you." I'm in love with the world you're creating, the characters, the way your mind works and the way your wordcraft feels like a love story just to me. I can't wait to read more.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/25/2018
Excellent
girlinthatdress chapter 12 . 9/2/2018
The last chapter genuinely made me tear up. Thank you for writing this (even though it kind of ruined me).
Lupa Dracolis chapter 12 . 7/22/2018
This was gorgeous, a lovely tight adventure with great characters I enjoyed getting to know. I love the world you've created, and the mythology. I want to say more good things, because I really enjoyed it, but it's hot and my brain is melting out my ears, so that's all I can offer.

One note, though - the formatting on chapter 6 is off, all the speech marks and apostrophes are rendered as accented Os.
Ihasa chapter 6 . 11/17/2017
There seems to be something switching out your quotes and apostrophes with accented Os
Shaun Shelongosk chapter 12 . 9/25/2014
Thank you. I devoured the story. What a remarkable mix of the erotic and mundane and beautiful story telling. Thank you for the treasure.
aiower chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
I think you're a wonderful writer, and I loved your characters. They are vivid and very original ... I love reading characters that I have no equivalent for anywhere, in real life or fictional worlds.
Nbsiren chapter 12 . 3/8/2014
Loved it
Nbsiren chapter 6 . 3/7/2014
ok you had me crying too...
Nbsiren chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
I get the feeling Mikah is nuttier than a fruitcake...but I'm not sure if it's in a good way or a bad way yet...
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