Reviews for Kastor Chronicles 1: The Forge of Dawn |
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![]() ![]() Not sure if you check this account at all anymore but wanted to let you know that I'm back for a reread! The mix of fun action wish fulfillment fantasy and absolutely ruinous angst gets me every time. I hope you are well good luck with Naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, the feels! Love finding out more about Kastor's past, Mikah's past, and so much with the Kyri culture. The world you've made is so compelling. I know I've said that a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel a bit like Mikah and want to say, "You amazing author, my undoing." I'm in your story's thrall! And I don't want to leave. Ever. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "My dissolution." AHHHHHHH. It's Mikah/Kastor in a succinct phrase of gloriousness. I love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every chapter of this story brings new levels and depth to your world, and I'm more and more enraptured! It's like a reverse onion. The more I read, the more the world lives and breathes and I don't want to keep reading because if I do, eventually I will come to the end and I don't want there to be an end. I may well end up writing some fanfic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so smitten with the dynamics of ALL of your characters! It's all so alive and vivid and creative and engaging and irrepressible and amazing. I'm doing a writerly swoon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm only two chapters into your story and I feel like I've made a new best friend. I was thinking of doing other things tonight that weren't reading your story, and I had this phrase go through my head: "I just can't quit you." I'm in love with the world you're creating, the characters, the way your mind works and the way your wordcraft feels like a love story just to me. I can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() Excellent |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last chapter genuinely made me tear up. Thank you for writing this (even though it kind of ruined me). |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was gorgeous, a lovely tight adventure with great characters I enjoyed getting to know. I love the world you've created, and the mythology. I want to say more good things, because I really enjoyed it, but it's hot and my brain is melting out my ears, so that's all I can offer. One note, though - the formatting on chapter 6 is off, all the speech marks and apostrophes are rendered as accented Os. |
![]() ![]() There seems to be something switching out your quotes and apostrophes with accented Os |
![]() ![]() Thank you. I devoured the story. What a remarkable mix of the erotic and mundane and beautiful story telling. Thank you for the treasure. |
![]() ![]() I think you're a wonderful writer, and I loved your characters. They are vivid and very original ... I love reading characters that I have no equivalent for anywhere, in real life or fictional worlds. |
![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ok you had me crying too... |