Well written with interesting characters and a unique quest. And its SLASH! Gasp! You broke all the gay fiction rules and made it good! How dare you! Honestly though, this is awesome. I would actually pay money to read this. Much better than most of the crap I've bought in a book store recently.

I can't remember the last time I cried so fully or loved a story so thoroughly.

Good job, now I'm sitting in my school's library trying not to cry (epic fail, now I'm crying and trying to make it look like I'm not, give me a minute to wipe my eyes).

I love bittersweet endings but it's sometimes a little painful for the heart and yours is very strong so my heart is all achy. That was brilliantly done by the way. Calm and quite and very effective. I'm not going to try and annalyse what made it work so well. Just going to tell you that I had a great time reading, many laughs, many moments of "to read or not to read instead of listening to the teacher's lecture" (to which my teachers wouldn't like the answer if they knew) and, yeah, a very emotional moment at the end. One thing maybe, you handle clichés beautifully until they don't feel like clichés at all. Now to read the next book in this serie. Thank you for your hard work and to allow us to read it.

OMG! I can't believe you got only 37 reviews (ok make mine the 38th) for this MASTERPIECE

wow this story was so good and the ending was so bittersweet i couldnt help but cry. thanks for the story

Oh wow, I'm actually crying. This was so beautiful and gripping and epic. I cannot understate the epicness. Mikah and Kastor were amazing from the beginning, and the plot and the world and their love and everything was just amazing. Amazing. I can't believe it ended the way it did and yet it happened and oh, My bittersweet indeed. So beautiful.

Thank you for sharing this amazing journey. I'm completely lacking in sleep and my heart is aching something fierce, but it is beautiful.

... You're good at making is SEEM like Mikah is going to jump into the spiritual equivalent of an active volcano...

But you wouldn't do that to me...

right?

D:

... Yeah, that's about as threatening as I get, so back to hope and denile if necessary!

~SaraMaxine

I truly hope the poor kid hasn't been brainwashed beyond repair.

But even more feverent is my hope that Mikah and Kastor's next kiss will be soon and under a bit less duress!

~SaraMaxine

ZOMG! Little baby Kastor! YES!

Oh I am on this like fangirls on twincest!

~SaraMaxine

Yay Lucien! Great character here, I wonder if he'll be like a berserker in battle. I can't imagine him being to vicious in battle of his own free will...

On and on we go!

~SaraMaxine

Lucien sounds absolutely adorable! Here's hoping he gets plenty of screen time!

I'm not sure if Kastor needs to be hugged or swatted right now.

Boy would this be much more cut and dried if I knew his BACKSTORY.

...

I know... It's there, I just have to keep reading.

Hobey Ho, Let's Go!

~SaraMaxine

I really hope that whatever is ambling out of those woods didn't ever feature in a nightmare of yours, because no one deserves that.

0_0

Jeez.

Right, reading on!

~SaraMaxine

*spazzing to much to articulate criticism, constructive or otherwise*

~SaraMaxine

What a gorgeous story. I don't usually review stories in the middle, and I'll leave longer thoughts later, but after this chapter I have to ask if you are/were SCA. Those armor details... :)