Reviews for Kastor Chronicles 1: The Forge of Dawn
AudreyKW chapter 12 . 3/12/2011
I can't remember the last time I cried so fully or loved a story so thoroughly.
Mewenn chapter 12 . 3/8/2011
Good job, now I'm sitting in my school's library trying not to cry (epic fail, now I'm crying and trying to make it look like I'm not, give me a minute to wipe my eyes).

I love bittersweet endings but it's sometimes a little painful for the heart and yours is very strong so my heart is all achy. That was brilliantly done by the way. Calm and quite and very effective. I'm not going to try and annalyse what made it work so well. Just going to tell you that I had a great time reading, many laughs, many moments of "to read or not to read instead of listening to the teacher's lecture" (to which my teachers wouldn't like the answer if they knew) and, yeah, a very emotional moment at the end. One thing maybe, you handle clichés beautifully until they don't feel like clichés at all. Now to read the next book in this serie. Thank you for your hard work and to allow us to read it.
Vij chapter 12 . 2/11/2011
OMG! I can't believe you got only 37 reviews (ok make mine the 38th) for this MASTERPIECE
drkmgic chapter 12 . 12/25/2010
wow this story was so good and the ending was so bittersweet i couldnt help but cry. thanks for the story
shyd1 chapter 12 . 12/5/2010
Oh wow, I'm actually crying. This was so beautiful and gripping and epic. I cannot understate the epicness. Mikah and Kastor were amazing from the beginning, and the plot and the world and their love and everything was just amazing. Amazing. I can't believe it ended the way it did and yet it happened and oh, My bittersweet indeed. So beautiful.

Thank you for sharing this amazing journey. I'm completely lacking in sleep and my heart is aching something fierce, but it is beautiful.
SaraMaxine chapter 9 . 9/23/2010
... You're good at making is SEEM like Mikah is going to jump into the spiritual equivalent of an active volcano...

But you wouldn't do that to me...

right?

D:

... Yeah, that's about as threatening as I get, so back to hope and denile if necessary!

~SaraMaxine
SaraMaxine chapter 7 . 9/21/2010
I truly hope the poor kid hasn't been brainwashed beyond repair.

But even more feverent is my hope that Mikah and Kastor's next kiss will be soon and under a bit less duress!

~SaraMaxine
SaraMaxine chapter 6 . 9/21/2010
ZOMG! Little baby Kastor! YES!

Oh I am on this like fangirls on twincest!

~SaraMaxine
SaraMaxine chapter 5 . 9/21/2010
Yay Lucien! Great character here, I wonder if he'll be like a berserker in battle. I can't imagine him being to vicious in battle of his own free will...

On and on we go!

~SaraMaxine
SaraMaxine chapter 4 . 9/21/2010
Lucien sounds absolutely adorable! Here's hoping he gets plenty of screen time!
SaraMaxine chapter 3 . 9/21/2010
I'm not sure if Kastor needs to be hugged or swatted right now.

Boy would this be much more cut and dried if I knew his BACKSTORY.

...

I know... It's there, I just have to keep reading.

Hobey Ho, Let's Go!

~SaraMaxine
SaraMaxine chapter 2 . 9/21/2010
I really hope that whatever is ambling out of those woods didn't ever feature in a nightmare of yours, because no one deserves that.

0_0

Jeez.

Right, reading on!

~SaraMaxine
SaraMaxine chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
*spazzing to much to articulate criticism, constructive or otherwise*

~SaraMaxine
IceraMyst chapter 5 . 9/7/2010
What a gorgeous story. I don't usually review stories in the middle, and I'll leave longer thoughts later, but after this chapter I have to ask if you are/were SCA. Those armor details... :)
Sanguineus chapter 12 . 7/30/2010
You made me cry!

Okay, there were tears in my eyes right befre Kastor started crying so I guess it wasn't really crying...but this is unprecedented I tell you! And incredibly tedius.

This was awesome and you just convinced me that angels can die (which doesn't bode very well for any angel I create henceforth .)
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