I discovered this story a few days ago and had a wonderful time reading it. After a few chapters the characters already started to feel as if I'd known them and read about them for a long time. I must say I love the setting and the world you've created with this story. It has more originality than a lot of the books i read written by well known fantasy and sci-fi authors. I'm almost sad I finished it. As soon as I have money again I'll defintely see if I can get the book version, to place it next to my favorites.

Hi!

I just wanted to say I loved reading this, I just read the whole thing in 2 days (I'm obsessive like that) and I didn't know what to say in the review (I never do), because I always like to try telling the author something useful, but I have no idea about writing, so even though I felt that it could be better somehow, I can't pinpoint what it is I feel is missing. Maybe more psychological depth or something, I loved the characters, but they didn't feel completely real to me, or can't identify with them. I don't know if that makes any sense.

Anyway, that doesn't mean I didn't love it, because I did, and I wanted to thank you for writing it and sharing it here.

:)

loving the first chapter. too tired to read the rest now, it's like three in the morning here. and new year's eve tommorrow... not gonna get much sleep, either:) anyway... just wanted to say, you definitely have a way with words, and i'm already liking the main characters. so yeah... gonna review some more later. happy new year!

I love this story! I read it about two years ago and then I read it again this year and it's fucking fantastic. I can't believe I found it here just now, pure coincidence when I was searching for something else. (I actually squeeled when I saw it!) Shite, this is one of the best, if not the singel best, original fics online. When I get the time I'm definitely going to read it again.

Have a Merry Christmas, a Happy New Year, and a Joyful Life, I look forward to reading the rest of your stories.