Reviews for The Boy Who Stole Midnight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. A masterpiece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! I really liked your story and I thought the way it was told enhanced it all very nicely. I particularly appreciated your delicate descriptions and the way you created a very sharp and precise atmosphere in just a few sentences. The plot itself is also fascinating, and you've managed to keep the suspense going nicely. The one thing that I thought was a wee bit strange was the ending. For a start, I didn't really get it (but then again, that might be saying more about me than about your text I guess...). But I also felt that it came across as a little rushed - as though you'd suddenly gotten bored with the story and decided to end it abruptly... Even if it's not the case, maybe reworking it a little so that it fits better with the rest of the writing would be worth your while? xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible; you've got a really keen eye for the subtlety of the strange and the insane. Surprised this doesn't have more reviews. Probably my second favorite piece after Zachary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice dialogue C : |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very strange O_O But well written and creative all the same. Interesting read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god, I love this. You are amazing ;-; asdjhk I'm trying to explain why I like this so much, you know, the descriptions, way you phrase everything, the pace of the story how it's so nicely done, but aha, I'd be listing everything. |
![]() ![]() I like this one! But in Cold Iron, Jedrah is blond. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. The kids are mysterious and complete at the same time. The wizard will probably be after him again, but Jedrah is a smart kid. The clock might take some fixing. I doubt the enemy is simply going to pack up and go home now that the plot is foiled, but I chose to believe they will eventually. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's very nice. Good to see this character again. I kind of miss Cold Iron. Anyway, please keep up the good work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story rocks. I always love the crazy/off kilter characters, and you pulled him off perfectly. I didn't get the last couple lines, but I love the story anyways. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I don't think I've read a piece of prose as elegantly eerie and beautiful as that since Frankenstein, which is entirely complimentary by the way. I was mesmerised all the way through, it's almost impossibly brilliant Gx |