sounds interesting! can't wait to read more and see where this is headed.

I love it. I do hope that you'll continue it. I like the way it sounds, the dramatics' are fine. Please do continue it. I support the story.

This was really good you should totallycontinue this

please update soon!

I like it :)

And I really like how you made the real princess deaf and all cause' that makes it more interesting so Kudos to you! update?

I think the third person works fine. I'm certainly intrigued- are the prince and princess really brother and sister, for instance? Update soon please!

Hey :)

First of all, I really enjoyed reading this, and even what you displayed of the characters in this first chapter makes me interested, they seem well developed already.

Though I was skeptical with the summary, because of all the disguises which made it seem like an over-the-top parody, I was drawn in pretty quickly.

And already I don't want Rian to die. That was bloody heartless, practically killing him off in the first chapter. I'm hoping he'll resurrect throughout the series. And it's already obvious that poor Reyna could use a bit of optimism in her life. :)

But there it goes.

And your job with the 3rd person pov was pretty good, I haven't noticed anything awkward.

Either way, you did a good job,I'm interested.

p.s. Uh, I accidentally (since the buttons changed and all) clicked on the button to add you to the favorites list. I removed you already, only because I'm really picky about it, and I add only stories I wouldn't mind reading again and again, so, yeah, I'm sorry about that.

Who's to say you won't end up there - but I'll see that when the story's finished.

well,

Enjoy~

interesting. can't wait to read more!