|Reviews for city of ashes|
| FictionsMyReality chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
i read the title and thought it was going to be about the book, City of Ashes..xD
| Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
'Defecate on me.' Wow, I had to look for the definition. That's one way to get a reader's awareness, so kudos on a hook, line, and sinker.
I also liked the forthright tone because of how the poem/narrator took a firm stand, and that it's 'on the highest degree.'
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| Isca chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
"Defecate on me." That line is INCREDIBLE. It's disgusting, horrible, painful, cruel, etc. It's brilliant, that's what it is!