OH wow ...I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY ! ..i havnt read anything like this so far on fictionpress ever ! ...PLEASE DO CONTINUE WITH THE UPDATES ...I CANT WAIT ..ITS ADDICTING :-)

Im hooked. I've never read anything like this before and i'm absolutley loving everybit of it. The disturbing character of the enigma is interesting and i like him. He's very realistic to me. All in all i love the characters. And btw the last part of this chapter was suprising, i didn't think he would stab her.

I missed the updates, but it's good to see the new chapter again. I think that the Enigma and Taylor are so cute and it's good to see that someone can get under the Enigma's skin xD. great chapter can't wait to read the rest.

wow... I love their chemistry!

update again soon!

O! You're Back! Thanks for the chapter! I'm starting to see where this story is heading, but I don't really know what actually happens in the end. Hmm...so for your writer's block, I don't really know if what I say actually makes sense. But here goes. Maybe you can do more character development. I'm sure that the Enigma might have other sides to his personality too (maybe some secrets? his past?). Maybe you can come up with some situations where he actually lives up to his name or where he shows some weaknesses as well. It will be cool to come up with some action scenes as well (maybe another villain?). And maybe some more progression on their relationship. Again, I don't really know if these work dependig on how you envisioned the ending. Hope this might help! Good luck! Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

A few typos, but this is absolutely fantastic! Really. Perfect pacing, just enough to satisfy but not wholly. Perfection.

So, what to do about the whole writers block. Well, honestly I would need to know more about where you're headed before giving any definitely usable suggestions but here's a few blind ones:

Have them continue to stay there. Joker continues working. She is stuck bored all day. But he comes home/sees her and the sexual tension builds until breaking point, which arrives at the climax of the crime vantage point- the cross between this and SS. Here, you could have Taylor with the Joker or standing up for him therefor proving her love, or she could be the damsel in distress. Just a fairly simple and extremely rough layout idea. Feel free to take or leave anything you want from it.

WOW. i just read the first 14 chapters and i LOVE it! Enigma is a lot like the joker- and when i watched the dark knight,the joker was my favorite. i might be crazy but i think it wouldn't be too bad to be with one of their types...

nice chapter...i like it !

update soon

Well this Chapter was interesting. You really learn that the Enigma is really smart. The part i most liked was their conversation after they threw the hooker out. Well you are good at making him not just evil but letting him have his creative sides too. He is an interesting Character. Will you finish saving smiles first or this story? Or do you work on both stories at the same time?

hum well interesting Chapter. I liked their Conversation in the lift, it gives a small insight in how he does things. Well Enigma, i think you will realize sometime soon that you cant replace her. Hmm still i like saving smiles a bit better, still this is a good story.

Interesting Chapter! He will take her with him? Thats bound to be interesting. Who will be the winner at the end? very interesting chapter cant really say what i liked in particular...just the whole chapter i guess.

Well, well this Chapter was interesting. And the Chapter name is the same with one in Saving Smiles...do you want to tell us something with that? Well i doubt he will get desinterested in her...ever?

Internet Explorer? The IE is crap! She should be using Firefox! Well back to the story i liked the search for his zodiac sign it seems its showing him as much as it contradicts him. He is really an Enigma, he seemingly has no reason for the things he does. Hmm so she is facing him in prison in the next Chapter? That should be interesting.

hmm darker than your other story but nonetheless interesting. I really like the Cat-and-Mouse game between the two and Taylor giving as good as she gets. I wonder how this is going to end, what also makes me think is the somewhat similar chapter titles between saving smiles and this story...some of them are similar. A good story.

THe Enigma seems really complex. I'm SO CURIOUS on how this masterpiece of a story will progress as well as how the Enigma will soften up to Taylor more..CANT WAIT FOR THE NEST CHAPTER UPDATE SOON PLZZ