Thanks for the story so far! This story is actually very interesting. Very different from other stories I've read. I;m enjoying it so far and I can't wait to find out what happens to Taylor! Thanks again and update soon! :)

I must say, I had thought that he would have gotten her out of the hospital,with some big she-bang and fireworks included. I'm scared for Taylor,that he doesn't get bored of her..

haha, I am still chocked about your fast updates, even if I knoe you will do just that! :P

And I must say, Enigma is actually getting more intresting for each chapter, almost addicting..? ;)

Okay, I just wondered, how many times has he said to Taylor, casually of course, that if he gets bored with her, he will kill her? But he is starting to like her in a... different way know, it looks like

Great chapter, can't wait for more!

Cheers,

Hm. Enigma is definitely starting to sound infinitely more sexier. :P ahahah I can see how she'd have trouble WONDERING if she was innocent. ;) ahah

Haha, just to tell you. It's HarLey Quinn not HarVey Quinn. Also, I went to read beirut's review and I agreed with it entirely, especially since I knew both woman had the same profession. I didn't comment after the original review because I trust in your fantastic writing abilities and believe that you will differentiate, but I definitely agree with beirut. It's written flawlessly as usual though.

It's Batman...in the form of Onyx city, The Enigma, and The Shadow. :p

:“except instead of my prince, the court jester decides to rescue me.” She said rescue with an obvious tone of irony, causing the Enigma to cackle.:

I do love Taylor. She amuses me!

I know that you are trying to keep you chapters to 1500 words, but, seriously...I WANT MORE!

Ok, sorry 'bout that. :D

CHEERS!

~Jeni

If Enigma is based on the Joker, it seems Taylor is based on Harley Quinn. I didn't really like the abusive relationship they had going on in the Batman series so I hope you're not going in that direction here. I do like Taylor more than I liked Harley though. Although you said the differences between the Joker and Enigma will show soon, I don't really see it, sorry. The painted face, the scars, the way of talking, his dress form...I don't know. Besides the question mark, it could be like you're describing the Joker. If you replaced Enigma with the Joker and Taylor with Harley, this could be a fanfic. Also, when you write "Chelsea smile", do you mean "Chester cat" smile as in the cat from Alice in Wonderland?

That being said, I'm not trying to flame you or "diss" your story, I actually really like it. Enigma is interesting and you make their attraction believable. Your writing flows really nicely and you write Enigma very well. I like Taylor as a character and sympathise with her. I can't wait to see what happens next after she accepted his offer. Again though, I hope Taylor isn't going to be a follower to him like Harley is to the Joker. Please continue writing and I hope the story starts to develop into its own as opposed to following Batman.

Oh ahahha

Yes he finally takes her! :)

I can't wait to hear about this "castle" for his "princess."

So happy to see the ever beloved Enigma back, and i'm already itching to read the next chapter, I am anxious t find out exactly what her-ah, castle is..._

Stinkin' Enigma.

I hate to love him and love to hate him! I think that's how Taylor is going to feel...? Am I right? Am I right? Am I right?

So was the Enigma just waiting around on the roof for Taylor to appear or did he have a grand plan in the works to 'steal' her away?

Awesomeness!

CHEERS!

~Jeni

Oh, I really like your fast updates! :P And I really like Enigma, but I don't know why, considering he is the bad guy ;) But he has alot of character, charisma, I would say

Okay, good chapter, I liked it )

Cheers,

Always wonderful.

Oh,and I also like your female of the stories I read on this site have independent females who show their freedom through loudness or through some crazy act of randomness,which,when done well,are amusing and fun to read,but get annoying after twenty different stories which seem to have the same lead female with differing names.I like the way yours is independent without the useless yelling and the way she knows when to keep her guard up or when to lower leads in other stories have some kind of guard up until they realize they're in love with the male and then drop it completely,only to get hurt later is much more I like the fact that she's quiet and wise for her , ,I'll stop if this was long,but I tend to ramble on when I become passionate about something.

Hope your next chapter's longer!:)

I'm completely hooked on this story and in love with the seems sweet in an odd,twisted kinda way,you know? And I'm dying to know if there'll be a scene where his face paint comes off completely and his face is finally if so,hahaha,when?Can't wait for the next update!Make it soon,please!:)

I am looking forward to seeing The Enigma soon, he's a pretty awesome villian, and I can't wait to see how he will whisk her away.