Reviews for Fatal Attraction |
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![]() ![]() Uncommon to see a chapter stop in the middle. it's what i felt anyway. there was no sense of an end in the end I hope you know what i mean ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, good characterization. And interesting scene, but these are short. I like the whole concept of each scene being a session but perhaps each scene could be longer? I guess that right now since they are just starting to 'warm up to each other' (in the worst way possible) it makes sense to be short but I hope they lengthen as time goes on. Anyways, I enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great dialogue. Great description. This is extremely well written. His speech impairment is interesting too. Overall, great job. I was captivated the entire time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it's a Batman rip-off, but with a completely original twist. Obviously, the Enigma is the Joker. But the Joker never went to a therapist to my knowledge. So the originality kicks in. The plot is unique and original, despite the backdrop not being. I am definitely interested in where this is going. Maybe, you could change the background and descriptions of your characters to make it seem less like Batman. This whole story concept is original, albeit a little Silence of The Lambs-esque, but it might be hard for some people to look past the numerous Batman similarities. Anyways, good luck. I'll be reading. The characters are definitely interesting and the plot is too. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start kind of confusing. I like the last sentance though. I am sorry for my spelling though. ~Pirate Girl~ |