I'm glad it wasn't a Phantom of the Opera ending. Very nicely written. :]

Uh-oh, Taylor's not going to turn into Christine is she? ... Oh wait, I know the answer to that question (once again..should not have read Saving Smiles first)..though maybe there's a plot twist!

.. Sorry, but I can't seem to stop reviewing your stories and sharing my thoughts.

Oh! Phantom of the Opera reference? Maybe.. I think it's likely, I think you wrote you liked it in your bio. I love it, it's one of my favorite musicals/movies.

Ah, that horoscope was a little creepy. I'm a Taurus.. if the Enigma was real, that would be moderately scary. It was kind of bad idea to read Saving Smiles before this, now I kind of know what's going to happen..

I like how your stories either directly reference something/someone from your other stories or in real life. Alpha male definitely caught my attention, though it might not gave been an actual reference.

Hiya, I just wanted to know that I really enjoyed this story. It's always interesting when you get to root for the "evil" character, and it made things even better that he was a psychological villain. I loved the relationship between Taylor and the Enigma - great job!

Lovely story so far! I'm intrigued.

By the way, there's a typo in "began to play a song on the computer"...piano, right? :P

Wow. i think this has been the best yet...

or maybe my love for the joker in the dark knight is making me a bit biased.

However i loved the dynamics between the two. 2 strong characters with this fragile love between them. I wasnt sure at the start whether i liked the whole stabbing idea but even though its not recommended for everybody else, it worked really well in the story and it ended up being quite romantic. Im starting to see similarities between your other stories as well... like taylor and enigma are like belle and jackaby in a way, going on missions together that arent exactly lawful... and there are other tiny ones. Its like u are leaving trademarks in each story and i think it works exceptionally well. keep up the great stories ]

Hey great story...loved it...loved the sexual chemistry between Taylor and Enigma.

cant wait to read the sequel.

keep up the wonderful work!

Peace;)

Brilliant story. I loved how complex and deep it was. I couldn't find a single flaw. Keep writing!

~read this story three times...~STILL LOVE IT

It seems like you've come such a long way from here :P But yeah, I'm bored so I'm going to read it again haha. Its nice to see how its changed 8D

so, i loved the story!..but the ending, well, not so much. I found it rather corny..but to each his own! the story was really good though, im looking forward to reading the sequal!

I love the story and Jace is a cute name (:

I loved this so much, its so different to the things i usually read, and just unique in general, i love the whole getting into the mind of a killer thing. But, even though it slowly developed, giving you little glimpses into his mind and life, you still never fully know the enigma, and i love it, the whole thing's shrouded in mystery. Their relationship is the same, though we see Taylors thoughts about and sometimes jasons, it still remains to be seen about what their realtionship is and why they're attracted to eachother- this is all good by the way, it allows us to speculate and i loved reading Taylors thoughts and theorys about what she was doing or why she was feeling like that. It was just a beautiful story!

The only problem i had was that i first starting reading 'saving smiles' and then got confused because in the summary of that, you talked about this story, and in the summary of this one, you talked about 'saving smiles', and i wasnt sure which one came first, because this story is your second one on your main page, also you have 'closer' and 'brighter than anyone' as well and i dont know which order to read them in so could you make it a little clearer?